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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-01-04 04:35 PM



Be Sweet To Him...

...the guardian
of your heart
holding in his hands
golden keys of promise
that set in tender motion
silver chimes of love upon
sweet zephyr

Be
sweet
to
Him
...

his eyes
your place of dwelling,
depths of emotions
reaffirming promises
held dear,
holding you, caressing you
igniting your passions,
empowering his,
love conquers all

be
sweet
to
him
...

for no one
replaces you,
usurps you in his life,
his beautiful existence shared
in union with you forever,
his goal,
pleasing you


His mistakes,
your own, are
as catching the wind
in your own hand,
with like importance
yes,
always,
Be sweet to him
Rembering,
love conquers all...

-Tier{Robin}
8/29/99





[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 01-04-2001).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2001-01-04 08:27 PM


This is lovely, Tier!! Very lovely!

Denise

Daniel J D
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2 posted 2001-01-04 08:52 PM


Robin,
Well done, your work is always enjoyable.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Sven
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3 posted 2001-01-04 09:08 PM


wise words of guidance. . . wonderfully sweet. . . superb Tier. . .

----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-01-04 10:22 PM



Denise, Daniel, & Sven, Thank you all for taking the time to read and comment!

*hugs & smiles*
-Tier

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-10-02 11:23 PM


Romantic, devoted,
lovely work.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-01-27 10:02 AM


wow Robin! I love this...something I should remember frequently!

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (01-27-2003 10:02 AM).]

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