poem about friends and life

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ranita311
Junior Member

since 2001-01-04

Posts 10

0 posted 2001-01-04 01:59 AM

                   LOS MANOS

   Los manos is about a group of people
  that mean so much to me.
  They woke me up, opened my eyes,
  and taught me to see.

  Los manos is about you and me
  and what the world could really be.


  step back and look....see what we have all done
  look at what this world has become.
  DRUGS....WEAPONS...VIOLANCE....HATE...
    A  PLACE ........OF DISGRACE

  we need to change this world of ours.
  instead of hate, and fear
  we need to bring more love, and cheer

  if not for you . if not for me
  lets do it for the childern.
  the pure inocent souls,
  there the ones to pay the tolls.

  we need to help these children out.
  thats the truth without a doubt.

   los manos is about
   love  joy  and hate
   letting the people know we need to congregate.

  no matter what culture  no matter what race
  we all come from the exact same place.

  the savior from up above,
  the one who gives us his endless love.

  if you need help  dont be afraid to ask.
  the Lord will help us through this difficult task.

                "LOS  MANOS"
                   means
                "THE  HANDS"
   the hands that will change the world
   so come join the never ending circle
                 of
              LOS  MANOS

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-04 02:02 AM

WOW.............I really got caught up in this one and for a first post you sure make a lasting impression. WELCOME TO PASSIONS and please stick around and indulge us in more.

Stan
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 120
Inland Empire Southern California

2 posted 2001-01-04 02:25 AM

Good poem! Keep writing, you have the touch

It's customary for us beginners to read other people's work and respond with a reply when something appeals to us. Your virtue is apparent and your message has an irresistible touch of candor.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-01-05 07:32 AM

oh my.....wonderful spoken words my friend....and you are so WELCOME in passions....looking forward for more

((hugs))
Charisma

ranita311
Junior Member

since 2001-01-04

Posts 10

4 posted 2001-01-05 10:02 AM

ty all so much for reading my poem. i was nervous this being my first one and all

)

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-01-05 10:05 AM

When you're right, you're right! Welcome to Passions! Terrific first post! Check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2001-01-05 01:49 PM

Great first post... welcome!!

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