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Close By My Side
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Close By My Side I wonder if she's just playing with me cause all my feelings are going to her. I'm getting so attached. Where's this coming from? I only liked her kiss. I had no idea she would affect me like this. She's not exactly what I want but she's got everything I need. I don't know where this is going. I Love to hold her hand cause then she's close by my side. I need her to choose me so desperately. To single me out from a crowd of many. Will she do this for me? Will she be my one and only? Jameslee@November21,2000 |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
James, Make your presence felt and she will be by your sides. Beautifully written. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
James, if you changed the she to a he, that'd be me right about now.  Hmm...If she doesn't single you out, she's missing something great in life. Great read.With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A kiss says many things, and I hope what you wish for comes true for you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'm getting so attached. Where's this coming from? I only liked her kiss. I had no idea she would affect me like this. She's not exactly what I want but she's got everything I need. ============== SBJ...if shes got everything you need..then youve answered your own question... another tender render from that heart of gold of yours... very sweet read  jm There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Daniel, Broken Winged, Wynter and Janet for reading and understanding. Oh yes Janet I have but am I everything she needs? James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ how could you NOT be everything she needs?! You are so awesome........what a huge romantic heart you have........I really enjoyed this  -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
If she has everything that can make you happy then that is the most important thing..but just dont settle for someone because they happen to be there...only time will tell..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah James...you have so much to give...please dont settle for anything less that %100 from her ok? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
James, I must agree with the others, make your presence felt, and who knows.....have she the same feelings and is she only waiting for a sign from you. lovely poem.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I'm getting so attached. Where's this coming from? I only liked her kiss. I had no idea she would affect me like this.' Great lines, James! What every girl wants to hear! Well, at least this one! Love it!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James I'll keep my fingers crossed, for you. Love will find you Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sometimes the one you want is not the one you need...time will bring you love...but patience is a sigh, I know...enjoyed your heart felt poem. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
She will be always on your side. Liked it!!!!!!! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Words that tremble like dew on a thirsty rose... lovely... -Tier |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea, Victoria, Paula, Charisma, Snowpants, Marsha, Martie, Vandana and Tiersdin for the nice responses. Tier very poetic and beautiful response...James |
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