Open Poetry #11 |
Arcane Discord |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Arcane Discord if you have to lament of me then bring it to the floor but don't pass the back of me not at our passion's door don't bring it to this very room once a room of grand delight and if you should discard me now then discard this very night for I have loved you once, my dear and more than once did I settle for the gift of you and in you, thus were I… with you I have gi'en promise rare with you, I did ever gust sweet promises, sweet evermore I ne'er knew your lust… so sweet dream, sweet refrain 'tis gone, long gone as it will sweetest dream, 'tis august, but love has lost it's refrain… 01.03.01 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow! I think you're on a plane beyond the rest of us, sunshine. I love the realm in which you live...wish I could reach so far... jwesley |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Is everything okay, Karilea? Denise |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
damn! um.... it's powerful.. angry.. forceful... honest... significant.... wonderful writing..... damn! geez.. it's floored me..... something about it is so important.... so real...it hurts me to read it.... excellent writing, karilea! ((hugs)) |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karilea, I must say this one has me very concerned.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello all...a memory return, 'tis nothing more... but kindly all of you have knocked on my door... james, some memories need be buried...true? denise, my dear, I am fine...thank you... doreen, honest I am, 'tis me... 'Deer, I thank you most for looking in on me... I am fine, I had a memory of gone... and in this, I should have written long... a man who betrayed my love so real and since hidden my way of feel... so forgive me as I lament the time lost, that could have been spent in searching for one, that one that would love me as if he should... but hey!...this is Sun...and she's fine! |
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