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My Dream |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
For everyday I dream... Of how our life will be, Walking hand in hand, so gracefully. Through the hardest of times, Through the simpliest of days, I want to share them with you. For everyday I dream... Of what life would be like without you, Not walking our walk together. I would be ever so torn, And so very incomplete. Without you, I am nothing. For everyday I dream... I look up at the stars in the sky, And I know you are there too. As we look at them together, I feel you through them, Staring back at me. For everyday I dream... I lie awake in bed at night, Longing for the day, Our bodies will meet. Feeling things we've never felt before, With the touch of your hand, I then, will be complete. For everyday I dream... The thought of your gentle voice, Whispering in my ear, All I've ever needed to hear. The voice of love, Your kind gentle words, Yearning to be heard. For everyday I dream... Of many things, But one most important, That I can dream them with you, By my side, For all eternity |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Lilpeanut, A beautiful entry in Passions, very well done. So much love there. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
What a beautiful way to make an entry into the world of friends you'll find here at Passions. I'm looking forward to seeing more written by you.  Very nicely done. With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Welcome to Passions Lilpeanut! I really enjoyed your poem, it is nice to dream our dream's with our loved ones isn't it? (check your e-mail for a special message) Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Welcome, and yes "by my side" is what most dream of *smiling* at your words ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
Daniel JD Broken_Winged_Angel DarkAngel Nakedthoughts Thank you for your kind words. I appreciated them. I definetly feel welcome here now. Please let me know if there is anything that can be changed in this poems. I am open to editing. Thank you again and I can't wait to read some of your work....Have a wonderful day! DarkAngel, Thank you for the email, check yours for a reply. You made my day  Kelly |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Welcome, lil' peanut... I know you are going to love it here. Great poem, enjoyed reading it and looking forward to more.. -Tier |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Flowing from the heart...the best of kinds. WELCOME!! Great poem!! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WELCOME to Passions and congrats on starting with such a wonderful first post. No better way to dream than to share the dream with one that you love. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Welcome! A beautiful writing. Will look forward to reading more from you! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions...great entry with such soft and gentle thoughts encased in a poem of devotion and love...very very nice indeed!! |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
Tiersdin: I really love it here.I think I am addicted already. Thank you! WhtDove: I just adore mushy love poems and I can't seem to write anything else. Thank you! Mark Bohannan: I hope one day I will finally get to share this dream with the one I love dearly. As we are so far in distance right now. I pray one day soon my dreams come true. Thank you! dreamkeeper: I greatly appreciate the compliment. Thank you! ethome: Thank you for the encouraging words. They meant so much! Thank you! TO all of you that relied...... I am so very thankful for the warm welcome! You all know how boost ones self esteem. But please feel free to critique too. Always room for improvement. Thank you again. Enjoy your day. Kelly |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful thoughts, Kelly! Denise |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Welcome Lilpeanut....the only thing I would change in your poem is.....nothing....to me it is perfect just the way it is.... alan |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
Denise, Thank you so much for your kind words. Take care and I can't wait to some of your work. Alan, Thank you so much for the flattery. You really don't think it needs anything? Well I appreciate it greatly. I am on my way now to look for some work from you and Denise. Take care. Have a wonderful Week. Kelly[This message has been edited by LilPeanut (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions. I loved the simplicity and honesty in this one. Hope to see more soon! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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