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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-01-03 05:53 PM

No Tears Today/A Tender Tale

Nothing ever stays the same.
  In some ways that is good.
I hadn't been away from home
  and thought that night I should.

So dressed myself, in pretty face
  drove down to the mall.
Decided then to movie watch
  and read the choices, all.

It was very late, the only time
  that I love to sit in dark.
All alone not crowded yet,
  slipped into a row, quite stark.

Before too long the aisles were full
  of people moving in.
I sat and watched those previews,
  impatient for the begin.

Tall and dark and handsome,
  his profile I could see.
His scent was so enticing,
  as it drifted slow towards me.

Against the wall, I always sit
  no one to left of me.
But on that right, my arm had brushed
  the shoulder of this he.

And twice times more, I seemed to touch,
  by accident of course.
The sparks that flew, lit up the dark
  in codes that spoke like morse...

Could almost read them, in the air,
  I gasped a time or two.
Wondered what was in his mind,
  as thoughts went surging through

My body, wow...could not sit still,
  I fidgeted in seat.
Waited for the next of touch
  to see where it would meet.

Sighing here, and sighing there...
  my hand began it's rest.
Leaned upon what I had thought
  was chair, but must confess.

Tender touch upon a  knee
  on legs that reached full length.
Oh my, can't tell the feelings felt
  when lost, what was my strength

Of reserve, that I would carry with
  to ward off, such events.
But on this night, I do believe
  this he was heaven sent.

Pretending not to notice me
  we watched the movie's end.
And waited for the lights to rise
  for others to descend

To exits that were next to us
  leaving just we two.
Turned until the eyes of his
  looked into mine, gray blue.

With arms of touch and legs to rest
  against each others will,
everything that moment light
  began it's time of still.

Lingering, afraid to move
  to end this brief affair,
Eyes to eyes, addressed each face,
  until he broke the stare.

Leaned close to me, with lips caress
  he placed them upon mine.
Tenderly, allowed the press
   and how he could define

The movie seen, but barely watched
  What Women Want, no tears
Were shed on this one special eve,
  a moments loss, of fears.

He read my mind, had felt my need
  and reached out for my hand.
Gently brought it to his lips
  this stranger, brought to stand

Pulling me then to my feet,
  arms he would surround.
Shared the warmest hug to lift
  my spirits off the ground....

In silent words, we walked through doors,
  I've never seen him since.
But on this night of loneliness,
  he was my "Shining Prince".

~Wynter

*inspired by ~Victoria's Secret

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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-01-03 06:01 PM

Well now Wynter!...flirting at the movies are we? hummm I don't know about that! I'm quite overprotective you know and this kissing a stranger well now I'm not so sure how the discipline committee will handle such forwardness...dear dear what to do...aw what the heck I hope ya had a good time...the story was quite a weave and you did it well! It kept me hooked throughout....take care.. ethome

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-01-03 06:07 PM

It was a "tease" E...I even titled it to catch a read or two..but it was all ~Victoria's fault...I liked her Silver Spurs so much I thought I would add a tale of my own...*s..don't believe everything you read...or at least not most of it

~Softly smiling at you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-01-03 06:09 PM

i have enough secrets hon..but this one i dont have

...i wish..haa...nicely written

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-01-03 06:19 PM

thanks ~V~ but you are quite an inspiration...*s

Me

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suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2001-01-04 09:58 AM

I was afraid this was going to be about that shop that taunts me at every mall... one of the major reasons I avoid malls for I'm not sure I'd fit in the STORE, much less their merchandise! LOL But I'm glad I opened it anyway (have to be brave, yanno... can't let a bunch of lingerie calling "nyah, nyah" keep me from a good poem! *G*) for this is a great tale!!! Well done!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-01-04 11:00 AM

Oh suthern it was meant to mean ~Victoria..here she inspired me with her tale of the Silver spurs.. *s

Believe me I have trouble fitting into things there, too...I dont know who the manufacturers create for...but for anyone who has ample of any body part..it us hard to find what is sometimes needed..huggzzz

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2001-01-05 06:44 AM

Oh, man!!!! (serenity stamps her foot...)
I WANTED to believe this one! and I did too...sigh...you vamp, you! LOL...well done!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-01-05 06:48 AM

well Dear..some parts may have been true..and others may have been left out but after all I have secrets to maintain...as ~Victoria~ does too

~Wynter...softly laughing at your response

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

9 posted 2001-01-06 02:55 PM

Nothing ever stays the same.
In some ways that is good.
I hadn't been away from home
and thought that night I should.

Lucky you went to see "what a woman wants" instead of "Home alone" bad joke, sorry. but seriously, a beautifully written poem.

There's a feeling of contentment Now that you are here I feel satisfied I belong
inside Your velvet heaven" Depeche mode

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-01-06 07:55 PM

thank you Brian..well I saw "Home Alone" ages ago...I just don't go and see Murder or Violent Movies..comedies will do for me for awhile..

you are funny ya know?

huggzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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