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Ascent/Descent
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Ascent/Descent In darkest of sky in low the east sun breaks the night to thus greet winter’s day now not so bleak as sun glints gold, new day to seek in blue of heaven sun casts a glow of spring tidings in that all should grow and gentle as a new babe’s sigh makes lovely ascension through the sky then on the summer day sun crowns in cast of rainbows all around emerald is lush in carpets of green vibrant rays upon sweet earth’s scene slowing making way t’ward the west not so much a fall, but in slow descends over all sun acknowledges the best casting promises to all yet again to rest now the gifts of the day quiet creeps in with cool of night the descent has quitted us from high tomorrow’s ascent a promise of light 01.03.01 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yes, the lessons of life are there for us in all of nature, if we only take notice...I love these gentle meandering ponderings that you write so well...I have to learn this subtle art of yours...(I have a tendency to beat people over the head poetically, lol...) Lovely, as always. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity...first, you grow OLD, very OLD...and then you take it easy....and always, always, you must smile... {~,^} and a wink thrown in for good measure helps! Hugs, and thank you...Sun |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
not so much a fall, but in slow descends casting promises to all yet again to rest now the gifts of the day quiet creeps in with cool of night the descent has quitted us from high tomorrow’s ascent a promise of light ======================= poetic wisdom blessed by the light that shines in your pen... very cool poem Sun, I love the premise of this. "I am constant" Mother Nature Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And at all hours, there is Sunshine... gently lighting our lives with poetry. *S* This is beautiful! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
beautiful, Sunshine, simply beautiful... -Tier |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, utterly utterly breathtakingly lovely. Kari this is so truly beautiful that I am dumb....... which then makes it difficult to tell you how wonderful this really is Well as you are trying to teach me the less is more theory. Stunning, Beautiful, Astounding, and wonderful Take care kid  Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
As I've said before....sunshine is always a blessing |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JM, my friend, you always give the epitome of response...the included refrain, the yet again of comment...has anyone told you lately, how special you are!...thank you... suthern, dear, how lovely the light of you...visit more often, please... thank you Tier....[I still love your name...] Marsha, in my position, less is always more...legally and otherwise...and then again...hugs to you... 'Deer, "if You say it, they shall know"...and I think that is a field of dreams type of response..., but hey, it fits!...thank you! |
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