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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2001-01-03 08:30 AM



The petal of the rose you sent
and more, perfume and passion mixed,
the scent of you, ambrosia's mist.
I breathed deeply of you,
filled my senses- you.

I answered to craving,
touched the petal to my lips,
sipped the merest hint,
filled my desire - you.

My eyes went green to gold
I placed the rose upon my tongue,
and then to dark, embracing gold,
I closed my eyes, opened my mind,
filled my love - you.

Filled me - you.



Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-01-03 02:31 PM


Oh yes me...I look, desire, touch and taste.  Not necessarily in that order.  James
Startime
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2 posted 2001-01-03 02:40 PM


*sigh*Love involving all the senses. Oh yes how very beautiful. Much love and hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2001-01-03 02:59 PM


Excellent!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2001-01-03 03:08 PM


Stunning piece of poetic beauty. I really loved this one.  Nice to see you back after the new year.  
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5 posted 2001-01-03 03:17 PM


love this.....soooooooo sensual .....though.
wonderful penned.

((hugs))
Charisma

maxtec1
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6 posted 2001-01-03 03:30 PM


DEEP SIGH  Wow is this ever wonderful. I so enjoyed the softness ans love of this read. Wonderful writing.

Love and light,
Richard

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii
7 posted 2001-01-03 04:21 PM


Aloha! Smiles Thank you to all of you friends! I hope everyone had a terrific holiday! Back to tying the muse to a keyboard..LOL Write on!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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