Open Poetry #11 |
The Rose |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
The petal of the rose you sent and more, perfume and passion mixed, the scent of you, ambrosia's mist. I breathed deeply of you, filled my senses- you. I answered to craving, touched the petal to my lips, sipped the merest hint, filled my desire - you. My eyes went green to gold I placed the rose upon my tongue, and then to dark, embracing gold, I closed my eyes, opened my mind, filled my love - you. Filled me - you. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes me...I look, desire, touch and taste. Not necessarily in that order. James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh*Love involving all the senses. Oh yes how very beautiful. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Stunning piece of poetic beauty. I really loved this one. Nice to see you back after the new year. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this.....soooooooo sensual .....though. wonderful penned. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
DEEP SIGH Wow is this ever wonderful. I so enjoyed the softness ans love of this read. Wonderful writing. Love and light, Richard |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Aloha! Smiles Thank you to all of you friends! I hope everyone had a terrific holiday! Back to tying the muse to a keyboard..LOL Write on! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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