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vandana
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0 posted 2001-01-02 11:34 AM


This is one of my fovrite poem and the most difficult to write it.It took two days to comptele it.But I don't know why,but it took long for me to write.Anyway,hope you all like it.....

This Is how our love started
Time after time,
Day by day,
As each day comes by,

This Is the way
we used to say
all the words
through out the storms,
through out the years,

This Is how our love started,
yes,
Our love grows stronger
Each day,
This Is how our love started
This Is how our love begun,

I don't know
how love started
Idon't know
why and how did happened?
I
don't know
how our love started
This Is the way
our love shines each day,
This Is how love started

I don't know why
But It just happened,
It just happened anyway,

When summer days
used to come
we used to run
And our love just grows
each day,
This Is how love started


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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-01-02 11:38 AM


That love can be such tricky stuff and it can just sneak up on you and all of a sudden you're hooked for life....this is a lovely poem! I enjoyed it!
Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

2 posted 2001-01-02 11:51 AM


your efforts were well worth the time Vandana...
wonderful poetry.  I liked very much.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-01-02 04:48 PM


It seems as if love just pops up as the sun...suddenly those feelings are inside our heart...perhaps they are always eagerly waiting for the object of our devotion...for someone to come along that we admire and desire...and hopefully our love will not set like the sun...but perhaps only take a brief rest and return as strong as ever...James
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