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haiku - #7 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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cotton feathers fall as melting clouds cover grass ~ it's a white Christmas! ~ 25/December/2000 ~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love these Haiku....wonderful done. Can Imagine these white feathers quite well Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome back my friend. This was a lovely image you painted with your haiku. A belated Happy New Year to you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome back Sudhir! This is a beautifully painted word picture...got your mark of perfection all over it...take care....ethome |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is absolutely beautiful! I've been told, though, that this would be a senyru as it is metaphorical in nature. I love the metaphor, though, it is wonderfully vivid! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, I too welcome you back. Wonderful haiku |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sudhir, I hope that wore your scarf while out making snow men and your knitted gloves as well.  Yes white christmas' are wonderful. We had one this year in old Eire.lovely poem. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
White abounds....welcome home Sudhir! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Sudhir....... Oh, it is so good to see you again, and read this beautiful Haiku!! Wonderful!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all from the bottom of my heart for such kindness... and my regards to all, Sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful description Sudhir ... so very vivid ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, Kit... and many regards, Sudhir |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
nicely done my friend |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you Beki... regards to you, sudhir P.S. sorry, I took so long to respond, but I guess this got lost somewhere... |
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