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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-02 07:59 AM


What is it?

I do not even know you
but i still feel your slash
your sarcasm cuts through me
I don't understand the clash

what is it about me you don't like
is it something about me I don't know
what is it that you fear in me
what is the fun you poke

is that you think I challenge
I truly have no clue
come and face me now head on
I have no fear from you



© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2001-01-02 08:12 AM


this is one slick poem, 1slicklady, I liked it a lot.
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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2 posted 2001-01-02 07:42 PM


power in these words. . .

excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


bslicker
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state of mind
3 posted 2001-01-04 07:49 AM


gj......helen
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