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maxtec1
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0 posted 2001-01-01 05:02 PM



Come
Richard Maxfield
9-14-2000

Come and talk with me
Share your hopes and dreams
I will make them happen
No matter how hard it seems

Come and snuggle with me
That I may feel your body near
Know my love is with you
Always strong and clear

Come and kiss me
May I taste you lips so sweet
You in my arms so tight
Makes my dreams complete

Come and touch me
Light my passion’s fire
It’s you my sweet darling
Fulfills my every desire

Come a dance with me
Soar through empty space
That we may dance to heaven
Our secret loving place

Come whisper to me
Say the thing I need to hear
Tell me that you love me
You’ll never leave me dear

Come and take my hand
That we may walk through life
As God has forever intended
A man and his wife


© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-01-01 06:19 PM


How sweetly romantic. I hope your lady sees all these beauties.
Sandra

maxtec1
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2 posted 2001-01-01 07:21 PM


Thank you Sandra for your sweet comment. As for my Lady I dont have one.  I write my poems to a Lady that I will meet some day and fall in love with. Thanks again.
Love and  light,
Richard

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3 posted 2001-01-01 07:31 PM



sounds wonderful.....

Charisma

maxtec1
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4 posted 2001-01-01 11:05 PM


Thank you lady for your comment. loved the Dancing lady and man, cute.
Love and light,
Richard

Aimster
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5 posted 2001-01-01 11:14 PM


Maxtec~
loved this! my first poem reading upon
my return to Passions. What a delight this
was. Apparent the love that is in your
heart for your wife. Simply beautiful...

take care.
~amy~

~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~



dgvarner
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6 posted 2001-01-01 11:39 PM


so sweet and romantic richard.... *sigh*...you certainly do have good dreams...  

hugs, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.


1slick_lady
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7 posted 2001-01-02 12:25 PM


richard i love your poetry.......you have such a tender touch....1slick_lady
maxtec1
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8 posted 2001-01-02 12:37 PM


Thank all you wonderful friends for your comments.
Love and light,
Richard

Lady Lightning
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9 posted 2001-01-02 01:46 AM


Come??? The Lady is here.. .lol..This is so, so good!! You just keep gettin' better!! Hugs.. ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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10 posted 2001-01-02 11:16 AM


enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!
ethome
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11 posted 2001-01-02 11:35 AM


This is writen with such loving feeling Richard...it's such an earnest appeal to the lady you love...may she fill your arms with happiness and love....ethome
maxtec1
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12 posted 2001-01-02 05:39 PM


Thank  you wonderful people for the great comments. Happy New Year to you all.
Love and Light,
Richard

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