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Sunshine

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0 posted 2001-01-01 12:40 PM

Blending U's

~*~

glinting of noon's sun
glistens on the falling snow
a globe in motion

~*~

your glint in my eye
I glisten then in your love
loving in motion

~*~

cacophonous song
snow tinkles silver ringing
reality's song

~*~

sing then me in you
song of my heart, this loving
motion in a globe

01.01.01

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-01-01 12:42 PM

Karilea,
You wrote an ice cream sunday on monday, love it. *L*

Kit McCallum

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2 posted 2001-01-01 02:33 PM

Wonderfully creative Karilea ... loved the blending amongst these beautiful u's!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunshine

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3 posted 2001-01-01 06:02 PM

Sy, now my mouth is watering for some fudge....lol...you, Sir, a true friend...and constant reader, I know...

Kit...cryptogram, to be sure...but U understood...thank you my lovely friend...

Balladeer

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4 posted 2001-01-01 06:17 PM

Oh, U beautiful poet!

brian madden
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5 posted 2001-01-01 06:17 PM

well you left me with a warm fuzzy feeling after reading this poem, which incase you are wondering is a good thing. enjoyed the poem.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Sunshine

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6 posted 2001-01-01 06:33 PM

& U Sr R a DeeR....

Brian, so glad to see U...

Marsha

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7 posted 2001-01-01 06:42 PM

Kari love, this is Utterly Utterly wonderful, it really is spectacular. And yes I adore it, as always now you can write beauty always, eternally, forever, there will be you.
Take care
Mushy

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Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Wilfred Yeats
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8 posted 2001-01-02 09:32 AM

So beautiful - it brought a tear to my eye - your talent just grows and grows

[This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 01-02-2001).]

Sunshine

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9 posted 2001-01-02 01:32 PM

Marsha, Mr. Yeats, thank you both for your kind comments...

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10 posted 2001-01-02 02:54 PM

sing then me in you
song of my heart, this loving
motion in a globe

simple and elegant writing, Sunshine

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Sunshine

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11 posted 2001-01-02 04:26 PM

Wynter, with soft regards, thank you...

ethome
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12 posted 2001-01-03 05:43 AM

You did blend them so very well....great writing my Sunshine poet pal!

Sunshine

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13 posted 2001-01-03 10:27 AM

Ethome, you caught on to the title...thank you!...

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