Open Poetry #11 |
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The Magic In Love (new years love song) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada ![]() |
As the years pass by like running tides you're still like a dream from above. Like a moonlit room on a honeymoon you bring out the magic in love. As the winds blow by under winter skies hand in hand we're warm like a glove. And storms move on to golden dawns and you bring out the magic in love. As birds fly by on a southward ride in the clouds rolling by above, the old grows new I'm still with you as you bring out the magic in love. As years fly by my heart stays high like a child at play in the sun. Like a merry-go-round full of happy sounds you bring out the magic in love. A little love song to bring in the positive aspect of the new year....ethome |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice way to start New Years Day. Thanks for the positive outlook, you know I needed it ![]() The poem is beautiful, and the thoughts even more so. Sandra |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
P T love this is MAGIC, utterly what I needed to read. Thank you so much, as always it is superb, and wonderful, and its soft and comforting too. Take care kid ![]() Mushy ![]() Thank you x Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"the old grows new I'm still with you as you bring out the magic in love." ===================== Everything you do is POSITIVE your a smile waiting to happen. and you KNOW I am digging this... the repetative lines sing in perfect harmony with your rhyme ... very cool E-babes....but then you always are Happy New Year to you to Van-Eric ![]() love ya jm Brand New Day Van the man When all the dark clouds roll away And the sun begins to shine I see my freedom from across the way And it comes right in on time Well it shines so bright and it gives so much light And it comes from the sky above Makes me feel so free makes me feel like me And lights my life with love Chorus: And it seems like and it feels like And it seems like yes it feels like A brand new day, yeah A brand new day oh I was lost and double crossed With my hands behind my back I was longtime hurt and thrown in the dirt Shoved out on the railroad track I've been used, abused and so confused And I had nowhere to run But I stood and looked And my eyes got hooked On that beautiful morning sun Chorus And the sun shines down all on the ground Yeah and the grass is oh so green And my heart is still and I've got the will And I don't really feel so mean Here it comes, here it comes 0 here it comes right now And it comes right in on time Well it eases me and it pleases me And it satisfies my mind Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"As birds fly by on a southward ride in the clouds rolling by above, the old grows new I'm still with you as you bring out the magic in love." Ahhhh ... so positively inspirational this New Years morn, beautifully written Ethome, just lovely! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Ethome, no better gift could there be, than a song sung in poetry...beautiful... |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this my friend, is wonderful. . . you're great!!! ![]() ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I loved this. It left me all warm and fuzzy. I will not be alone next new years I will have a lady to hold and romance. WELLL MAYBE lol Love and light, Richard |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Most beautiful Love music to ears Forever love true Happy New years Hope |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ah... the magic of love. What a beautiful song of poetry you bring to us this new years day. Deb |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written ethome..and HAPPY NEW YEAR to you and yours..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome A beautiful write my friend. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Aww Ethome... You made me sing this afternoon... Yes, I liked this...I did.. ![]() My first read today and I go on my way with a smile...Thank you!! ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A beautiful sweet love poem, my friend True...makes me smile, it does..thank you. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I can't resist...I have to do a quote from one of HEARTs songs(female band from the 70's and 80's)..HE's A MAGIC MAN!!! so is your poetry, magically written to put a glow in ones heart!!!!HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR MAGIC!!! ![]() |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"And storms move on to golden dawns" ethome--I like this muchly. Beautiful writing. Happy new year! Poeminister |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful way to start this new year....love this song. Happy new year my friend. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you catalinamoon for the response much appreciated...ethome Marsha I'm glad this is what you needed to read and I hope it helps....ethome JM thanks dear poet pal.... I always love your replies and I really love your latest... thanks for the positive word....ethome Kit I thank you for the inspirational words and thanks for reading....ethome Karilea always good to sing a song in poetry glad you enjoyed...ethome Thanks Sven for the kind words always appreciated....ethome Richard I'm sure you won't be alone next new years, especially the way you write beautiful love poems...ethome Thanks Hope for the short but sweet verse... ethome Thank you Blooming Rose for the fine comments on the musical aspect of this...ethome Thank you so much Victoria for taking the time to read and the wishes.....ethome Seymour glad you could drop in to take a read ....ethome Lady L thanks I'm glad I got you singing a little on this new year's day....ethome Martie it's always a pleasure to hear from one of my back up singers...glad you liked it .....ethome Romantic Heart I remember the song well and I thank you for such a wonderful comparison comment.... ethome Poeminister thanks for the kind comments much appreciated....ethome Charisma I'm so glad you liked the song and that it did what it was supposed to do ....ethome |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Love, magic and hope in lyrical form....gets no better than this! Happy new year, ethome ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Balladeer I tried to do all those things...take care...ethome |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ah, beautiful! What a lovely note to start the new year out on! Love poems are my very favorite. For what else brings the heart such joy? Thank you! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
e babes, this was inspirational. *Kethry comes across to ethome and grabs him and dances him around* Happy New year huggle bunny. write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Rosemary for the comments...and yes, you're right, without then what do we have....take care...ethome Hey Keth my picnic partner..... what a great dance we just had! Thanks for coming over and reading this and giving me a big hug....ethome |
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keep-the-faith New Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 6Northeast USA |
I would love to hear the music... ![]() "Like a moonlit room on a honeymoon you bring out the magic in love." wonderful line... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ethome, tis a great song for the New Year. Of hope and love, always good. ![]() Parker |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Keep The Faith and welcome to Passions. You'll enjoy it here...thanks again for the comment...ethome Thanks Parker for the read....ya all come back now!.....ethome |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A perfect love song! I love it, ethome! Denise |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Your music comes alive in this one sweet poet man...care to share the magic? Im singing right along with you....xxxxxx times a jillion |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
ethome- I'm so glad I didn't miss this - there's absolutely nothing I did not like about it - it is truly wonderful ~S~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Denise glad you felt it that way... ethome Thanks Paula I was trying to get the new year off on a positive love note...ethome Bill I'm very pleased that you liked all of this thanks for taking the time to comment...ethome |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ethome, my friend? I have been reading...and you are quite a romantic yanno...geez...I need some of that...sigh... just lovely. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful... Of course, I'm sitting at my desk avoiding work... so I'll have to pretend my sighs are from exhaustion instead of envy. *S* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very romantic and beautiful "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Celeste and yes I am and so are you! Suthern get back to work but thanks first! My dear sweet wild Irish Rose thank you! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Ethome, This is such an upbeat song to lift my spirits. It is the hope of the New Year and so delightful a verse. Thank you for this, dear poet (I love the rhyming scheme) Liz |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
What a perfect way to describe the feelings. I just spent New Year's with my fiancee and this poem captured the feeling! He does bring out the magic in love for me. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Elizabeth I'm glad to have given your spirits a lift....etmome Tara I'm happy for you that you had great new years celeb with your fiance...thanks for reading and commenting....ethome |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
beautiful, AP |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Do keep up that possitive attitude, may your new year be wonderful ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Hoot I will keep the attitude and will be looking forward to reading and commenting for the remainder...ethome |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Hoot I will keep the attitude and will be looking forward to reading and commenting for the remainder...ethome |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the old grows new I'm still with you as you bring out the magic in love. sighing.....had hoped this to be a "forever feel" for me too...very nice E. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Agust much appreciated! Wynter I thank you for the enjoying that verse and for taking the time to read...ethome |
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