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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Vendue So cold the chill walks the length of my spine Face down in a cloud of white my fingers clutching lace Icy linens in gentle hands rain the bay waters across my back A deep breath fills my mouth a taste of musk calms my trembling For all our seeking the lashes we endured find healing enveloped at Vendue Inn © Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This is beautiful. It must have been one great night at "Vendue Inn". |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
For all our seeking the lashes we endured find healing enveloped at Vendue Inn just how beautiful is this? breath taking.. and promising. ~eyn "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I can see the outside lights dimly glowing behind the window shades and I can feel the peace that love can bring... such a release from the the stress that fills the day....I think I've got this right ...good work!! ethome |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Inot2b, Thanks for reading, I appreciate your remarks. Robert Joseph Snow (I love snow) Thank you for responding, I'm glad you found this piece to be so comforting. Robert Joseph ~enb~ ethome, thanks for your observation, I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this one. Robert Joseph |
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