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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Morning's new light Breaks through the night Illuminating my soul Making me whole Warming my heart Mending each part Soothing the pain Building once again Tears now dried Many of them cried To reach this point Things out of joint Dawn is here Erasing my fear Maybe on this day I'll find my way < !signature--> Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 11-20-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful. I don't know how this one was slipping by, but it deserves some attention.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dawn is here Erasing my fear Maybe on this day I'll find my way...... With each dawns light fear fades with night, skies turn to blue as life surrounds you.... Beautiful way to show the newness that each new day brings LW. Well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Hi Lonewolf, I admire your positive ending here. A message of hope enduring through sadness. Lovely writing, thank you ~ Rainydays |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Today Is The Day SO Many Call To You Themselves Gods Indecipherable Only Colloquiollolised Way Who could find an Accent SoulReaching SoulKeeping The HighWire Act In FearsGlory Defeating Simultaneously NoneANDAll Enough The Stanzas ARE Misunderstood Why Oh Why Should They Be Different From The Words All Are In All The Words Embrace All Unhearing Unheralded Unheard Words SpeakScreamm ALL And The Days That They Linger They Are Nothing To You At All Yet You Remain And The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Give |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW~ very uplifting and hopeful piece. your work is always beautiful, so i've come to expect no less...yet time and time again you amaze me. this is no exception. take care. ~amy~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Temptress . . . Thank you. Sometimes they just fall. Gentle Spirit . . . Thanks for the stanza. Each day is a chance to start again I think. Rainydays . . . You got the message here, my friend. I try to stay positive these days, but some days it is like a losing battle. DreamSeeker . . . Thanks for stopping by and reading. Amy . . . I hope that I can live up to your expectations. Thank you for your thoughful reply my friend. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A Renewed spirit with a new day expressed very beatifully through your words. Like the rhyme and the flow. Nicely written. take care, Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
As you know my friend, each new day brings forth new opportunities. Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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