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SPLAT kind of day.....
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SPLAT kind of day..... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Today bit like a mangy blue-gummed dog. It sucked, was rank, it smelled of hogs. 60 second agonies ticking by with no relief... Poe's pendulum never had such capacity to drive one mad! I'm on the ledge-- below--the street... but NOW I look before I leap! I have to smile. I shake my head. Alive, I am already dead. (LOL, as I retreat...) And if you still do not believe-- I know a ledge----- b e l ow!--the street... (repost...just because, well, it just keeps getting better by the second...sorry folks, but I gotta laugh about it!) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Well this certainly was the most interesting post I've read all day. lol Gotta admire anybody with a good sense of humor.  This was really cool and all that stuff. I hope your day starts looking up. Angel I am no one if not myself. ~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I had a mangy blue-gummed dog, He lay around like hedgewood log, One day, myself, I sat and thunk, My gawd, my dog, he really stunk. sorry...hehe it is one of those kind of days... enjoyed your poem. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you...the fire is out, but I think the microwave is shot...but there will be no steaks for the play off game today...which doesn't matter becaused my tooth is abcessed again....but the fever is back and...and...I think I'm gonna go lay down now...lol... SOMEBODY FEEL SORRY FOR ME!!!!ROFL...ow...that hurt too... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ROFL!quote: god, i love ya!!!!! hehe.... this poem ROCKS!!!! |
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Wicked Witch of the East Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 69 |
I lay in bed, I thought was dead, But for the pain, I can't explain, The pounding dread, within my head, Why won't it wain, cries out my brain? Broken filling, dental drilling, O' curse the bane, of toothache pain, I'd be killing, if God's willing, To cease refrain, of molar's pain. What can relieve, and grant reprieve, From curse, the bane, of toothache pain, It will alleve, I must believe, Or will abstain, from life mundane. I cry aloud, I am not proud, Down on my knees, O' help me please, To God I vowed, if he allowed, Relief to ease, the pain appease. Consternation, tribulation, But then I see, it came to me, Inspiration, jubilation, Tylenol three, O' come to me. I took the pill, and downed with swill, Pain's vacation, pure elation, It fit the bill, the blessed pill, Transcend dental medication. (hope the tooth is better...) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What the hell...lets have a beer...the "splat" will go away sooner or later...LMAO |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey, I've got some steaks over here if that will help. . . and I think that I can help you with that tooth. . . anything else?  I am here at your beck and call. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey you!!! Thanks for this. Much needed. Sending what little positive energies I've got. They're all yours! *Peace. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You pulled the wool over my eyes...I thought this was going to be a snowball fight!!!... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... glad I've got some company on this ledge Serenity ... loved this much!!! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YER SO KEWWWL ... sorry bout the Microwave baby.. BUT look on the bright side... NOW ya got a reason to call the PIZZA BOY OH YEAH!!!! feel better me twin... ya can only fall so far....right?? dont answer that.. love your wit Sen me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What toppings would you like on that pizza and would that be THICK or thin crust. ROFL.......loved your way of laughing it off but sometimes that is all we can do to make it through the day. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOL! ok, serenity, the sympathy wagon has arrived.... Oh, you poor girl! How can these bad things happen to someone as beautiful and loving as you are? It's not fair!! All you want is a little happiness in your life (and the ability to bite down on an apple). I can't understand why fate is being so unkind to you! Why is it that the worst things happen to the best people? It is so SAD!!!!! My heart goes out to you, you unfortunate waif!! feel better? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wicked Witch? Tylenol 3's cry out to me... I hear the sweet refrain... But once doc's know? You love them so? No one believes your pain... Ow...rofl...thank you all...and pizza? I don't need no stinkin' pizza...a bottle of whiskey and a bullet to bite on? I'll be fine...GRRRRRR.....laughing, omigod...you people are terrific! |
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