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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-12-30 12:49 PM


Hold my hand
take a walk with me
through the feilds
of dandilions
swinging on the willow trees
that i'll plant for you and me
and you will tell me that
you are speechless
with no words for the love
you feel for me
but the night will come
and the stars in the sky
will twinkle and tell of
the love that shines between us
for just a moment the universe
will know of the love that belongs
to just you and I.....

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-12-30 04:57 AM


Beautiful romantic poem!!
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-12-30 10:31 AM


this is wonderful Julie!!

just perfect. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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