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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-12-28 10:40 PM


Hurtful scrawls
across the canvas of my life
jagged lines
torn from corners of black and blue
dreams
pristine white hope
stained with droplets of red
pain filled
artistry
your talent given over to cruelty
painting me abruptly
out of the
picture...

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-12-28 10:47 PM


Then he must not know the true beauty of art as it is ALWAYS painted in love and with a passion or it is not art at all.  His loss and I am sure you will find yourself stretched across the canvas of a much more worthy painter of life.  Excellent write my friend.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Denise
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2 posted 2000-12-28 10:50 PM


His loss, indeed, and your gain. Excellent expression, Sandra.

Denise

athena4
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since 2000-12-10
Posts 622

3 posted 2000-12-29 09:06 PM


Sandra,
      I can feel your depth of love and sorrow. Your heart is a masterpiece of beauty, and one day your Prince will hang your portrait in his gallery. I know you will find him someday...
            Love, Elise

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