Open Poetry #11 |
How I Love You |
snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
There are so many things I love about you; I couldn’t possibly Get them all out. You are my motivation; You are everything. I love the way you tell me It'll be alright just when I think It will all fall apart-- No one else could convince me like you do. And the way you touch me when all seems lost Will always be a mystery to me. How do you know just what to say To break my soul out of its habit of self-pity? And how do you still stand by my side? I'm not sure I understand How you love me so persistently. I find irresistible the way you speak to me-- With a voice so soft, So understanding to a complicated heart like mine. Even when I don't understand these emotions, You have a solution to my problem. Oh, you'll never know What an inspiration you are to me! -kh I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Don't know why this was lying back there going unnoticed...So back to the front you go for all the others... Love is all over the page on this one...Liked it much... ~LL~ < !signature--> The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
this is so sweet and tender Ihad to bump it up |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
this is so sweet and tender Ihad to bump it up |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
sp~ Lovely tender write....loved it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
How do you know just what to say To break my soul out of its habit of self-pity? loved these lines ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
LL: thank you! I appreciate your kind words!! Beki: thanks for the bump! Always appreciate that! tracie: thank you! I am glad you liked it! Wynter: thanks! Glad you enjoyed!! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
great one snowpants. . . just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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