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for sven(though i apologise that this is not as well written as i want it to be) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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the lesser ones of us struggle to express ourselves in verse, our thoughts seemingly trapped in deep dark crevices, like fishbones caught in the throat twenty-six letters, hardly much to go upon but amazingly articulate is he, like a mighty warrior with his trusting sword, he roams through life with his words, baring himself for all's delight those letters come alive when he writes they trust him to pen them right like a puppy and its unconditional love, they lie obediently and queue up orderly, one by one, to be composed on paper and so he writes he weaves magic, pushing his writing to the limits, endeavouring, embracing new forms of expressions and his words always come through for him, so comfortable they are with one another, so in chemistry they are if you call someone who is good with locks a locksmith i wonder if you can call someone gifted with the pen a wordsmith for sven is one and most deservingly so... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
kaile, he is a wordsmith isn't he and you could be his 'prentice with your lovely expression write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
kaile, he is a wordsmith isn't he and you could be his 'prentice with your lovely expression. write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
kaile, my friend. . . thank you. . . I am honored and touched. . . your words have indeed moved me greatly. . . thank you again. . . and this is wonderfully written, as it's from your heart. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 12-27-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Absolutely marvelous penning. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kaile~ What a most delightful and charming tribute for our friend Sven and yes indeed a most talented wordsmith he is well penned Kaile Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice tribute to a very kind poet who has time for all...wonderful quality! and yes he is a wordsmith! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and his words always come through for him, so comfortable they are with one another, so in chemistry they are I loved the expressions here..you penned a wonderful poem, kaile ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I've been away for a while, but I do remember reading a lot of his work, and you pay him a wonderful tribute. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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