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Amazing Glory |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Amazing Glory Clouds came down to cover mist Dew drops shimmered o'er the gley Shaping shapes of hedonist Magic silver in the grey. Moistured winsome full of hues Throwing mirrored rays of broil. Ribbons glistened glowed in view Giving wonder to the soil. There before this sweeping lush The fabulous of natures coup Wondrous painting of Gods brush Painted there within the dew. And when the silver changed to gold And clouds and mist rose up undone. The dewdrops dropped to there unfold Gods green chambering in the sun. And we a part this wispy story A part of this amazing glory. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Magnificent... this part of you to share is remarkable at best |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Moistured winsome full of hues Throwing mirrored rays of broil. Ribbons glistened glowed in view Giving wonder to the soil. There before this sweeping lush The fabulous of natures coup Wondrous painting of Gods brush Painted there within the dew. And when the silver changed to gold And clouds and mist climbed up the sun. Dewdrops dropped to there behold Gods green chambering in sun. And we a part this wispy story A part of this amazing glory. ===================== Sy-guy this is stunning...amazing imagery "Throwing mirrored rays of broil. Ribbons glistened glowed in view" what a way cool couple of lines those are . awesome vision. a lovely jewel to add to my Sy-treasure chest ... me thanks you.  *WW* me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It is amazing, isn't it? Your poem is beautiful, Seymour! Denise |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
~and when the silver changed to gold and clouds and mist climbed up the sun dewdrops dropped to there behold Gods green chambering in the sun~ Good imagery, exquisite writing. A real pleasure to read. Deb |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
great one from you Sy. . . love it as always. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--what wonder you have colored in this poem...just beautiful, you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Thank you and *L* JM, And we thank you WW S Dsnyder, Thanks for the beautiful. BloomingRose, Thanks for the beautiful comment. Martie, Thank you sweet. *L* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Seymour, absolutely beautiful this poem you write... Thank you for the enjoyable read this evening... Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Stunning ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I ALWAYS love your couplets, Sy..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, It's always a pleasure to give you joy. Marge, Thank you for the stunning, *L*. Nan, And I'll always love you. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Amazing Glory, is what I really found here...wonderful penned. Charisma |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy I know - I've said it before, but it bears repeating - you write in a style that is not predictable, that demands attention. Your use of words always surprises me, and always leaves me thinking, "How in the world did he surprise me with that?" It seems so natural, so perfect after reading - yet, so unpredicatable before reading. But, in both cases, Perfect. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Thank you for the read and the nice comment of wonderful. LngJhnAg, Thank you for the kiss on the other cheek. LOL And my regards to your better half. |
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