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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Layers of Whispers Virginia Salter layers of quietness rest within the realm of time whispers of gratitude beheld in harvest rime pumpkins bedazzled with glistening dew amber leaves and gold flitter past the yew blazing sunrise steams the rooftops nigh billowing puffs belch from smoke stacks, fly brittle stems hold up crispy flowers decorate my garden through these morning hours creatures seek place for snuggled repose curling into tiny balls tucking tail ‘round nose autumnal equinox carpets land ablaze reds, yellows, browns, ‘neath sky filled with haze song of birds grows silent, save sea gull’s laughing cry, finches nests full empty as season sidles by © October 23, 2000 |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Well written verse with great flow, a pleasure to read. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, John, for taking the time read and comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
layers of quietness rest within the realm of time whispers of gratitude beheld in harvest rime ============= autumnal equinox carpets land ablaze reds, yellows, browns, ‘neath sky filled with haze song of birds grows silent, save sea gull’s laughing cry, finches nests full empty as season sidles by ========== Virginia this is so beautiful such lovely imagery in this ... and wonderful rhyme flow as well just beautiful!!! take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I love poems about nature and this is well written with good imagery. Deb |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Janet Marie and blooming rose, thank you so much for your wonderful comments and having taken time to read my poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, Virginia! Lovely images! Denise |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a very peaceful write Virginia, I enjoyed it very much ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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