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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Touch The Eyes Touch The Mind What Does SeeFeel BringForth From The Depths Of I Past The Haze Beyond The Maze Exists All LifeSongs Can You Hear The TouchSong SightSingingDreamBelieving Whole New Definitions Therein Required Of You Behind SelfSame Eyes Opening MelodyReal Lights The Path living Heard In EvermoreTouching Eternitys Breath The TouchSong |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dreamseeker, this had a great feel to the vision you presented. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Interesting flow and format. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing Regards, Olias. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OK, if you're going to write like this, I need to retire from what I do and just read you... Wow... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Only a dreamkeeper could write words that curve and twist along the senses in such a pleasing way! loved it! -Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Listening and feeling. . .  wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was very clever. Nice writing and welcome to Passions. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cool....very cool.. i'm really enjoying your poetry every chance i get! hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
DreamSeeker- wow...i like this a bunch! awesome write!! look forward to reading more from you. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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