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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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you you ask me to write so others will know how I feel ok, now I open up remember it's my blood that I spill my heart it pours such incredible love lost within the pain and yet I am now open it's true, I still remain |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
This is really good, is it supposed to be in the shape of a knife? Either way this is really effective and intricate.....but at the same time very powerful. "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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shinamoon Junior Member
since 2000-12-07
Posts 15Daytona Beach, usa |
 nice and strong and truelike something i'd have written looking forward to reading more |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to passions.... i liked the poem which you have chosen to make your entry with...yup,true words spoken, we all write for an audience to reveal ourselves...nice thoughts  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
CareBear3, shinamoon, & kaile .......Thank you for the warm words or welcome....my fears of joining the passions family have been eased & look foward to being a "real" family member..............enchanted 1slick_lady |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good writing. Welcome to passions. Writing is very helpful when dealing with pain or so it is for me. Love and light, Richard |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Welcome to Passions! Great first write, full of heartfelt emotions, yet straight to the point. Look forward to reading more of your work. Deb  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautiful start and welcome to the real world Slick. Nice Job . Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am now open it's true, I still remain I think that these are my favorite lines. Welcome to the forum, Helen. And life is short, GO FOR IT. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
gj helen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Now this I really like. Everything about it. The words, the flow, the feelings, the form...well done, my friend. jwesley |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Helen's first post. |
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Lady Goodman Member
since 2012-10-04
Posts 193 |
Made me smie... Thank you, "e".  |
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