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Soft Blue Eyes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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~Soft Blue Eyes~ I smile in thought when I think of how you looked at me, with those soft blue eyes seeking approval in mine... I wonder, did you think I looked the same? Could you have picked me out of the crowd coming through the door, as I could you? It was ... the blue jeans and shades. Would have known you anywhere... Did you smile in thought as I approached, and called your name? Did you dread the moment of the meet? Afraid that we wouldn't be comfortable with one another? Your soft side was showing, and my heart was opened to it... listening, learning, understanding and becoming familiar... You leaned in, closer and I know you could hear my heart beating... see the blush in my cheeks, feel the laughter vibrating the air as we shared and shared and shared... When we parted, did you feel as if we had known each other a long time ago, in some other world where those who are sensitive to others can exist without shame, without holding back what is inside that makes them who they are... As we hugged goodbye, I smiled in thought... ~I know you now, not just through your words but through your soft blue eyes~ this one's for you... ~Wynter < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Your soft side was showing, and my heart was opened to it... listening, learning, understanding and becoming familiar... You leaned in, closer and I know you could hear my heart beating... see the blush in my cheeks, feel the laughter vibrating the air as we shared and shared and shared... Such a lovely write...I really liked these two verses...  This one is a keeper... ~LL~[This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-26-2000).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Very lovely poem! I really enjoyed the love and voice flowing through this, it was beautiful! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~LL~ what a sweet compliment..this is written for someone special on here...I hope he enjoys it when he is able to read it... Noah- thank you for stopping by...I appreciate your kind words ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
~~ big sigh~~ Wonderful writting. Love and light, Richard |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
A lot can be said from just a single look into someones eyes. If you did meet in another life you will know it when you look into their eyes. I have had this feeling myself and yesterday I recieved an answer to what I seen behind a beautiful pair of eyes. I knew that when our eyes met, our souls touched and the feeling was beyond explanation and neither of us can let go of this unexplainable feeling. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Wynter - all you write is good and worthy - but sometimes you really stand out - I sensed your heart in this one - - loved this |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Richard  huggzz~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that is so wonderful John...made me have a ~soft smile~ this morning...huggzz and happiness to you always ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bill, my heart is in everything I write... it is what fuels my day...fills my thoughts and shares my words with you...hope today is a bright one for you...huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Nakdthoughts, Well my friend, I can't say that I'm in awe of your talent, for I always have been, from the first poem of yours that I read to the latest one. I am very touched, and will always remember that someone thought enough to write something like this. Thank you my friend, and again I am very touched. My heart has been warmed by you, and thank you again. You're very special. BC |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"When we parted, did you feel as if we had known each other a long time ago, in some other world where those who are sensitive to others can exist without shame, without holding back what is inside that makes them who they are" This is a beautiful love poem. The person I love also has those soft blue eyes... you describe your feelings wonderfully. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bill... nothing was more special then getting to meet you in real...words on here are wonderful but the eyes and expressions when speaking to one another face to face mean so much more...and show me the sensitive side of you...huggzz and smiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you LoveBug, this was a special poem for a special poet..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I love it. It's just so romantically sweet. ~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you ~Susie, it was a memory made day...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh you romantic you! So well written...loved the intimacy of the moment...you... swimming ...in the esp of those soft blue eyes.... LOOK OUT! Wynter's about to melt into spring..... whew! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
haaa....I can melt in any weather..just need the right heat...you are really high spirited today in your responses E..making me smile again..first in the morning now in the evening...thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well it is about time that a little spring thaw found it's way to you. This was lovely my friend in both the heart in it and the presentation. Excellent read for sure. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
oh Mark, it's just that I was graced with the chance to meet one of the passions poets in real..and it was truly a wonderful experience and this poem is a token of my thanks...for his friendship before and after the meeting. Thank you for responding ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A lovely write... Thank you for the enjoyable read... Coco |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Coco, glad you enjoyed...it's nice to meet new persons and to realize they are even more wonderful in real then on the net.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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