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One More Day
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One More Day |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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One more Day thoughts of love so missed carnaubian light remiss 'twas you that were kissed in the dream of night one more day to spend happenstance of chance, and then newness 'round the bend in the dream of night snow scene, winter's glint flakes falling and piling high cold seeking warm sigh in the dream of night see the scene to seem imagination to dream 'twas you that I kissed in the dream of night Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, I'm so glad I saw this one. It's beautiful, wonderful, splendiferous Write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keth, dear, me too... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You're weaving my heart again Karilea...I've not been here much in the last few weeks but I know as I read this that I'm always going to find what my heart seeks here....an understanding weave that touches me when I need it most...Beautiful writing...as always my friend~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is another of you superb exceptionally beautiful written gems. I love it because it is so you. It shimmers it glistens, its wonderful, very well done love Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the things that dreams can bring my friend. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I will NEVER grow tired of reading and thinking about dreams! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
brings Dinah Washington to mind...What a Difference a Day Makes...and never more true than when dealing with affairs of the heart...another winner, sunshine  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and I have missed you BDC...it's not nice to stay away so long...and I'm glad we're still in sync... Marsha, the gem always lies in your response, thank you... Sven, thank you for the wonderful... Irish, that, my dear, is because you hold the hope...and I the light... 'Deer...I grew up on the great songs...and so appreciate the "winner"...thank you!... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"Dream - when you're feelin blue - Dream - that's the thing to do ... ... Things - never are as bad as they seem... So dream, dream, dream" and the lyrics keep coming back love this view |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully expressed, Karilea! Just beautiful!! Denise |
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