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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-25 11:24 PM


One more Day

thoughts of love so missed
carnaubian light remiss
'twas you that were kissed

in the dream of night

one more day to spend
happenstance of chance, and then
newness 'round the bend

in the dream of night

snow scene, winter's glint
flakes falling and piling high
cold seeking warm sigh

in the dream of night

see the scene to seem
imagination to dream
'twas you that I kissed

in the dream of night



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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Kethry
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1 posted 2000-12-25 11:32 PM


Karilea,
I'm so glad I saw this one. It's beautiful, wonderful, splendiferous
Write on
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-12-25 11:47 PM


Keth, dear, me too...

Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2000-12-26 08:12 AM


You're weaving my heart again Karilea...I've
not been here much in the last few weeks but
I know as I read this that I'm always going
to find what my heart seeks here....an
understanding weave that touches me when I
need it most...Beautiful writing...as always
my friend~

Marsha
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4 posted 2000-12-26 12:25 PM


Kari love, this is another of you superb exceptionally beautiful written gems.
I love it because it is so you. It shimmers it glistens, its wonderful, very well done love
Take care
                 Majestic Marsha
                          


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Sven
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5 posted 2000-12-26 12:30 PM


the things that dreams can bring my friend. . .

wonderful. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Irish Rose
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6 posted 2000-12-26 01:12 PM


I will NEVER grow tired of reading and thinking about dreams!

"Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell."
Joan Crawford

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7 posted 2000-12-26 01:26 PM


brings Dinah Washington to mind...What a Difference a Day Makes...and never more true than when dealing with affairs of the heart...another winner, sunshine  
Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-12-26 05:17 PM


and I have missed you BDC...it's not nice to stay away so long...and I'm glad we're still in sync...

Marsha, the gem always lies in your response, thank you...

Sven, thank you for the wonderful...

Irish, that, my dear, is because you hold the hope...and I the light...

'Deer...I grew up on the great songs...and so appreciate the "winner"...thank you!...

Wilfred Yeats
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9 posted 2000-12-27 02:55 AM


"Dream - when you're feelin blue -
Dream - that's the thing to do
...                  ...
Things - never are as bad as they seem...
So dream, dream, dream"
and the lyrics keep coming back  
love this view  

Denise
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10 posted 2000-12-27 09:27 AM


Very beautifully expressed, Karilea! Just beautiful!!

Denise

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