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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
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Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-12-24 10:25 PM



Watching as you go astray
My hands tied, can’t get free
Lost at what would change your way
So you could clearly see
That what friends share
Sometimes can take
Away pains of daily wear
The ones that make us break

Break into that sorrowed place
Where nothing can seem real
Confused by option that remain
Blind us to what we feel
Lead us from the given path
Direct us to and fro
Wonder in this aftermath
Which way we are to go

Take the time to see this through
Realize the truth contained
It stands here right in front of you
Yet still you hold restrain
Hold back what you really feel
That beat I hear while close
A look you try not to reveal
Consumes me yet the most.

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-12-25 12:45 PM


A look you try not to reveal
Consumes me yet the most.


backspacing blues again...hell, I'll e ya about the rest....

Love ya much.


spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2000-12-25 09:53 AM


Thanks Seren,
Always an adventure
Rich

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