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emily
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

0 posted 2000-12-24 05:30 PM

Weep through winter's wonder
and wait upon the spring;
for deep within the robin's breast
are promises to sing.

Glide upon the sail wings
of another dream, believe;
that when you're soaring freely
your heart will cease to grieve.

Touch the first born lily
before you taste the bloom.
And come into the light,
your essence fills the room.

Melt along the patches
of a glacier marked with pain
and meet the sunlight knowing,
that you're now alive, again.

I love you but I failed you,
forgive me, if you will.
I know you were an empty vase,
neglected on the sill.

There's time now, for refreshing
as every season does
and time for restoration,
because you're truly loved.

Emily

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

1 posted 2000-12-24 05:28 PM

True love is forgiving and over looks its mates short comings. Very good writing.
Love and light,
Richard

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-12-24 07:04 PM

Glide upon the sail wings
of another dream, believe;
that when you're soaring freely
your heart will cease to grieve.

Touch the first born lily
before you taste the bloom.
And come into the light,
your essence fills the room.
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I love you but I failed you,
forgive me, if you will.
I know you were an empty vase,
neglected on the sill.

There's time now, for refreshing
as every season does
and time for restoration,
because you're truly loved.
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Emily this is lovely poetry
a beautiful poem of second chances
your imagery is wonderfully done and your cadence and rhyme were perfect,
this was a treat to read aloud
excellent writing
take care
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2000-12-25 11:50 AM

Enjoy the read!!!!!!!!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-12-26 08:15 PM

from the heart. . .

wonderful emily. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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