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Open Poetry #11

Oklahoma Magic

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-12-24 03:59 PM

Oklahoma Magic

Among
the
twinkle
of
white
lights

Against
the
backdrop
of,
Silent Night

With
a
hint of
Chianti
on
our lips

Underneath
the
mistletoe...

He asked
with
tears...
"Will you be my wife"

...within
the twinkle
of
white
lights

She
turns
her
hand
... both left & right

(Mistletoe is the state flower of Oklahoma)

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 12-24-2000).]

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

1 posted 2000-12-24 05:34 PM

So she said no. How sad for him. I live in Texas and ours is the blue bonnet.
love and light,
Richard

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2000-12-24 05:31 PM

hmm, shoot, i thought this was clear enough,
maybe it is to me only.. laughing,

see when a woman gets a ring, she likes to see how it sparkles in the light..

in my piece.. she said yes.
thank you for the comment ;-)

snow

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

3 posted 2000-12-25 01:11 AM

   In love, yes that's it...simply in love with your words, Neve.

  Robert Joseph
   ~enb~

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2000-12-25 07:49 PM

*smiling*
thank you, sweetie.

Merry Christmas,
Neve ~eyn~

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

5 posted 2000-12-25 08:12 PM

I say the way the words are arranged help strengthen the message this poem portrays.

Will you come travel with me? Shall we stick by each other as long as we live?

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