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what she does.........................................................
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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what she does…….. she blinks looks east sun to greet and smiles faces south soul beams warm heart dances casts eyes westerly horizon sees charm she blinks faces north cool winds kiss cheeks in the turn in the turn of mind turn of time a circle complete completely hers to share arms spread wide encompassing all silent prayers prayers wing wing upward slight bend hand to mouth lips to fingertips soft kiss pats the earth spirits dance soul romance in spirits dance a circle again begins again, and she is then gone Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
She does it beautifully, Sunshine... Michael |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
When I read what you write here, my gypsy soul can't help but laugh and dance for joy! This is magnificent...a wonderful way to start my morning!! Thank you!!  Follow your dream! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
What I see is a child arms outstretched spinning freely in her youth and I blow a kiss back to you dear friend. Bob <>< |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
spinning here. . . whhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Finding the horizon no matter which way she faces leads to the same promise of life as it all ends up in a circle. Lovely write my friend and so nice to be back reading your works again. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, This is the cream of the crop, wonderful, outstanding and excellant. Such a perfect one love, the circle of life, Oh I love this one, absolutely love it. really well done. Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Michael, she's such a little dreamer... Sunny1, any time I can give the Gypsy a gift is a GOOD day... Bob, that's almost right...now see her as a woman who is gracefully turn, and one who knows how to thank... LOL with you, Sven...thank you... Mark, the circle of the spirit is telling, indeed... Marsha, yes...exactly,...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful magical dance in an never ending circle of inspired spirit...very nice indeed! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a nice picture you paint, sunshine. Yes, love is all and all is love....everywhere you look. I especially like the part about the soul beaming and warm heart dancing facing south There is mothing like loving life and living love. I like this one very much... |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I like the re-emphasis of words from line to line, they add to the flow of the piece, great subject and perfect style. Regards Olias |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Feel The Music Of The Dawn Hear The Light To You To You Called In Song Whirl Midst Rainbow Braziers Entitities We Call Sing The Dawn In Dance Feel All That Surrounds |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You know this affords me the vision of your spirit ~ Dancing the dance of circles ~ Ever engaging the earth in her sharing ~ Ever thankful for the gift she is wearing ~ Turning ~ turning time again turning ~ So very soulful, sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you ethome, for taking time to join the circle... 'Deer, did you catch the wink?... Thank you Olias...I enjoy your work as well... Dreamseeker, you provide very interesting responses, thank you... Marge, I am so glad you found this one...I had hoped you would feel the energy and come join the circle...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, back in the circle you go. Around and around  take care MM Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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aurora rain Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 90 |
i'd lost my inspiration these past few days. but here i am, again, to relinquish in the joys and colours of poetry. this was great inspiration. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So soft and delicate...a beautiful weave...felt like a soft breeze on a summer day...utterly perfect~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, I think I shall lay my future in your capable hands...thank you... aurora...I can only hope to inspire...it is you who shall aspire...thank you... Butterflies...you are so welcome...I now look forward to seeing your name every time I turn, and I enjoy the treat...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The circle, the dance...beautiful! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie...YOU are the dance! I know, because I can see it in your dimples...Thanks! |
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