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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2000-12-24 02:20 AM



Would She be Strong Enough?
Virginia Salter

Could one make an angel
out of sugar and spice?
Might she face all the tragedies,
the maladies, the vice?

Would she be strong enough
to stand the strongest storm?
Or protect a new babe
on the day he was born?

When concocting an angel,
perhaps seek elements of steel
To face the day-to-day world
and its harmful appeal.

Yet steel that’s not tempered
with practiced use and command
Has not wisdom nor ability
to provide what’s needed  to stand.

Suffice it to say
and to say it quite well;
Only God makes an angel
that can shield us from hell.


© December 23, 2000

© Copyright 2000 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-12-24 02:25 AM


"Suffice it to say
and to say it quite well;
Only God makes an angel
that can shield us from hell."

Oh how true without God how would we of made it.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2000-12-24 02:35 AM


I love angels! Maybe we will be angels one day!!!
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-12-24 04:15 AM


Right VAS that's a job for the grand creator for sure...the other ideas are very sweet to say the least....have a nice holiday.. ethome
maxtec1
Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
4 posted 2000-12-24 10:40 AM


Through out my life if not for the hand of God I would never have made it. Great writing.
Love and light,
Richard

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
5 posted 2000-12-24 01:01 PM


Thanks, all, for reading and for your sweet comments.  Thanks for not minding my sharing my faith.
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