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A Shimmer of Christmas Snowflakes
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A Shimmer of Christmas Snowflakes |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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~*~*~*~*~*~*~ A shimmer of snowflakes Drift though violet twilight And spray a twinkling horizon... The trees yawn, their aging arms Netted in colored lights And from somewhere beyond Curls of gray cloud Sleighbells tinkle and chime. Tiny cottages lay nestled Between silver-silhouetted hills And the mellow dance of candlelight Wafts behind drawn curtains... Sleepy eyes gleam As a gentle Christmas melody Creates a pathway to dreams. In the quiet moment that suspends Just before dawn A soft chuckle and footfall Can be heard upon the snowy roof... Presents delivered with care Are laid gently beneath the tree. Morning stretches forth, her wings Blazing with a rosy fire And from every tiny house The excited murmur of children And the tearing of wrapping paper Can be heard by any passing ear. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is very lovely and warm! Merry Christmas to you! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Wonderful Christmas poem, my dear. Filled with your beautiful words as always, I only wish I could spend my Christmas a little closer to you. Great writing  Abrahm Simons "I'm not sick, but I'm not well, and I'm so hot, cause I'm in Hell." - Harvey Danger |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"The trees yawn, their aging arms Netted in colored lights" Incredible imagery Krista! You've captured such a wonderful holiday spirit throughout this whole poem, just beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Awesome images, I like. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful, very beautiful. The title drew me in and the Christmas weather was fabulous! Gentle, lovely. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So peaceful and warm and tender. The word pictures so serene. Have a holiday as nice as your poem! ethome |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Krista, this is a gift of magic! Love it Hugs, you |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all very much and Merry Christmas! *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Your poetry is like opening a present early ! Thank you and Merry Christmas, hon ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful poem Krista filled with great imagery, would love to experience a a white Christmas Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Every poem from you is just like a Christmas morning present! Beautiful, as always, Krista! Denise |
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