Open Poetry #11 |
Mere Words (#7) |
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Mere Words I searched among the card displays, To see if I could find, A little something that would say Just what was on my mind. However there was not a one, That captured it just right, For no one else can understand Just what I’d like to write. I even find it difficult To try to write it down, For how do I portray to you, The love that I have known? I close my eyes and what I see, Is someone I adore; A person who is beautiful, Write down into their soul. Mere words cannot describe The many qualities you show, The love and caring nature that You share with those who know. Your kind and gentle temperament, Your sweet angelic smile, Your softly spoken sentiments, That reach across the miles. Your smile and laugh that sparkle with The softness of your sighs, The way your face lights up a room ... That twinkle in your eye. The loving gestures through the years, That quickly come to mind, For always you’ve a gentle word To calm and soothe I find. I struggle and I search to try To find some words a’new ... And yet I cannot capture All the things that make you “you”. I shall therefore, be satisfied That you must simply “know”, Just how I feel about you, For with words I cannot show. /Kit McCallum |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is never anything mere about the way you pen, or what you have to say...I love your reposts... never put the quill down Kit...never... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kit, great re-post, If a picture's worth a thousand words then your words are worth more than gold. Very imaged write. Write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, I'd say you did pretty good. Nice work. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Certainly nothing "mere" about these words Kit...any card would be proud to display them. Wonderful write. jwesley |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Sometimes there just aren't words, are there? Well, not for YOU, but for some of us... Well done, my friend. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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