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Two Lonley Hearts |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
TWO LONELY HEARTS by Richard Maxfield 3-5-99 Two lonely hearts Meet in the still of the night Each one sadden By things that was not right One had been hurt The outer broken By actions, lies The unspoken Two hearts Afraid to care Two hearts Scared to share Each heart To a different beat Broken by Lovers cheat One reaches out The outer draws away Saving its self For another day Things that might have been But could not be Two hearts blind Could not see Maybe there will Come a day When the hearts Can sing and play One of the hearts Beat with in me Some day soon To be set free |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice Richard! The treachery of the heart showed in this along with the sadness.... good work!! |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
To let go of past hurt is to forgive and be set free to love again. This poem is sad and I do relate. May you be so very fulfilled with all that you dream of. Your poetry reveals the heart of the poet. Somebody shall find the treasure! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a really good piece. It's hard to reach out after being hurt, but it just takes time. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you for the comments. This poem was so true at the time I wrote it. Love and light, Richard |
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