Open Poetry #11 |
Are You Man |
maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Are You Man By Richard Maxfield 11-21-2000 If you are man What are you suppose to be If you are not what your suppose to be Then what are you What have you become What is it that changed you What has robbed you of your fulfillment Are you flesh Are you soul Are you spirit What rules your life Greed Selfishness Indifference Or are you ruled by Love Kindness Caring We are not mortal beings Having a spiritual experience We are spiritual beings Having a mortal experience |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!Richard, such wonderful messages here for both men and women. Much love and Christmas hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
woowoo love the closing of this poem |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I too, enjoyed this Richard. Reminded me of something I read--um, somewhere..(smile) and that is that we do not have a spirit--we ARE SPIRIT. Your love and light is shining in this one. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Bravo! Yes we are. The mortal experience is to inhance and develop that spiiritual man who shall live forever. It is just of matter of where we shall live. Your poem is moving and emotive. Bless you Richard! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you all for the wonderful comments. I do write a few poems that I hope invoke some thought to the reader. love and light, Richard |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard, wonderful, this is an amazing truthful piece from you. It does make you think deeply and ponder. Really excellant, i do love this one take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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