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Where Punch Line should Be
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Where Punch Line should Be |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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This, where the punch line should be Lots of empty space and me They crowd around for hyped event Time and care and gasp for more air Was it worth what they spent This, where you courtesy smile Nervously laugh, fill with bile Shuffle your feet and turn with grace Excuse yourself remove yourself Show pity upon your face This, where you explode in laughter Three beats off now is after People look at you in fear A good joke seems when man is broke Isn’t that why we're here? [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-24-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know what you mean Walt it's just become too much all together and it needs to be removed or tamed down to a whisper....take care......ethome |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sigh...timing is everything, isn't it? Hugs to you, waltie! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I wanted to thank you two for replying to this. thanks |
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