Open Poetry #11 |
Sultry Afternoon |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
On white sand being tenderly caressed by the waves of the sea. footprints in the sand barefooted sensual pleasure being wet. feeling something special happening between you and I embraced by the sea © 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa (All rights reserved) Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow..........a walk along the beach leading to love. I can't do that here but you have brought the visions to us wonderfully. Beautiful write. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wow very good little poem here. I loved the picture you painted. Love and light, Richard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ These are such lovely thoughts. How tranquil is the scenery. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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windwarrior New Member
since 2000-12-22
Posts 7California |
MMMmmm Koko, Your wonderful words are as delicious as you are.You just keep coming with those shortly worded poems that are long on the emotive qualities that stirs the blood. How do you do that so well? Thanks for the invite here~~ I have another to post soon oxoxo>>>R.J. live like there's no tomorrow, RJ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sweet imagery here, koko. Enjoyed the walk. jwesley |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This reads like a soft song, very serene and lovely thoughts! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Big smiles at you all! Thanks for the comments and reading this. I hope your Christmas' is toasty with all the warmth of love! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a dreamy romantic atmosphere you created for this one...well done!! |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Ethome, thanks much for reading this poem and your kind remarks. I appreciate the favorable comments from all the fine artists here at Passions. Merry Christmas! The weather allows for me to write about this. I know most of you have a white Christmas. Throw me a snowball! LOL Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"embraced by the sea." Very soft words Koko...Christmas kisses...James |
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