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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2000-12-22 07:52 PM


On white sand
being tenderly caressed
by the waves
of the sea.

footprints in the sand
barefooted
sensual pleasure
being wet.

feeling something special
happening
between you and I
embraced by the sea


© 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa
(All rights reserved)


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2000 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-12-22 07:54 PM


Wow..........a walk along the beach leading to love.  I can't do that here but you have brought the visions to us wonderfully.  Beautiful write.
maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
2 posted 2000-12-22 08:06 PM


Wow very good little poem here. I loved the picture you painted.
Love and light,
Richard

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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-12-22 08:15 PM


KoKo~
These are such lovely thoughts.
How tranquil is the scenery.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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windwarrior
New Member
since 2000-12-22
Posts 7
California
4 posted 2000-12-22 08:25 PM


MMMmmm Koko, Your wonderful words are as delicious as you are.You just keep coming with those shortly worded poems that are long on the emotive qualities that stirs the blood. How do you do that so well? Thanks for the invite here~~ I have another to post soon oxoxo>>>R.J.

live like there's no tomorrow,
RJ

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2000-12-22 08:30 PM


Sweet imagery here, koko. Enjoyed the walk.

jwesley

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
6 posted 2000-12-22 08:57 PM



This reads like a soft song, very serene and lovely thoughts!

Take care,
Melissa


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
7 posted 2000-12-22 09:14 PM


Big smiles at you all! Thanks for the comments and reading this. I hope your Christmas' is toasty with all the warmth of love!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2000-12-23 09:12 AM


What a dreamy romantic atmosphere you created for this one...well done!!
KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
9 posted 2000-12-23 12:43 PM


Ethome, thanks much for reading this poem and your kind remarks. I appreciate the favorable comments from all the fine artists here at Passions.

Merry Christmas! The weather allows for me to write about this. I know most of you have a white Christmas. Throw me a snowball! LOL


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2000-12-23 02:26 PM


"embraced by the sea."  Very soft words Koko...Christmas kisses...James
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