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I'll Write You.... (Response to Balladeer's respone to Doreen)
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I'll Write You.... (Response to Balladeer's respone to Doreen) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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Oh Balladeer, you foolish lad, Do you think that she'll be glad, When you've written of your prowess? How you look when you're undressed? How you shave your chin and back? How rich you are for what you lack? How rascally you are when you're alone? How often it is you must atone, For philandering acts that you inflict On innocent women you have tricked? How fickle you are when you're on a binge? How easily, when sober, you come unhinged? (I guess she's safe if you come over) (How rare it is when you are sober!) So go on 'Deer, woo our sweet Doreen, It's time she sees what we men have seen. I only hope she wakes up in time, (And promises instead that she'll be mine!) bwahahahahaha |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
ROFL - Thanks for the early morning laugh, LongJohn. I wouldn't worry too much over Doreen, she's a pretty intuitive gal ya know. It's been awhile hasn't it? - Sure glad to see you again.  Michael |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, humor in time for Santa's arrival...what a way to start my vacation.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
LJA, You promised you'd be true to me and now I see you philandering over these blue pages. I'm going off to sulk and I'm not even going to tell you how good your poem is or how much it made me laugh  Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Boys will be boys, but you know it's not fair to try and take over Deer's sweet girl. You already have one of your own. Besides we know one is all you can handle at a time. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Good one, sailor! *S* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey, longjohn! great to see you, my friend... i got a question... could you explain something to me, please? i'm not sure if i read this right... let me get this straight...hmmmmmmmm....... soo.... i write a poem, asking to be written... and you write to Balladeer, asking me to promise to be yours????!!!??  i'm so confused.... why would you write to HIM to ask? ROFL  .... i'm right here... GEESH.... hehe.... well, anyway, Merry Christmas and write me sometime, ok? *wink* - if you want it, come and get it... for cryin' outloud! - david gray |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WRITE HER!!!!!!!!!!!! Or is it that Balladeer's love poems have gotten to you so much that he is all that you can think about and you disguise it behind your words of jest with a sweet poet mentioned in the end. Now I am curious to see what happens next in this one. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a friendly bump "thump"... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
ROFL!! Cat got your tongue there, LongJohn?? hehe...backed up against a wall, are thee?  Well, you trashed me good...you got the invite..let's see you rise to the occasion (although Lorelei swears that hasn't been possible for years) LOL! I think inot2B has you pegged REAL well...obviously your power of non-performance is well-known...LongJohn....your destiny is calling..LOL! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Pearl handled pistols at forty paces!! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
As once we set Russia loose on China To stay in first one contender would be blind a As we thought with Iran and Iraq 'Twould be obvious that both did lack Essential resources fot the fray Neither with strength to stay the day Moreover both missed the dark horse Coming up on the inside of course So take a peek at the catbird seat See who's purring oh so neat Sorry fellas |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Doreen - Lessee if I understand what I think you have indicated. The last two lines of my poem to Balladeer says, in one sentence, *ahem* I only hope she wakes up in time, (And promises instead that she'll be mine!) Now, let's review your response - shall we? You responded to my very confidential letter to 'Deer: "soo.... i write a poem, asking to be written... and you write to Balladeer, asking me to promise to be yours????!!!?? i'm so confused.... why would you write to HIM to ask? ROFL .... " I wasn't asking him, ya silly girl - I was hoping... Did you REALLY read my poem? *hurt eyes* Thank you all for your encouragement - big hugs for everybody |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
yeah, i read it.... it's just my shameless attempt to solicit attention.... *hurteyes*  so.... write me sometime, k? *wink* ROFL sorry to intrude on your "confidential" response to balladeer... lol.... geez...  i HOPE this made sense... hehe |
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