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| Open Poetry #11 |
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She's Jackie Chan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
She's Jackie Chan Tell me this. How can so much happiness be wrapped up in the verbalism of a phone call? This happened shortly after a whole world of sensuality traveled thru her kiss. And why do I feel so lonely when she doesn't call? I never realized it was possible to so deeply miss her kiss. Perhaps I am letting my feelings run wild and she doesn't care for me at all. So I have to say its alright if she doesn't have a soft place within her heart for me. Still this doesn't help me deal with my soft heart desiring the pleasure of her company. And really its not alright. It's lots of loneliness and emptiness each night. I truly miss her. She's the world's best kisser. She has determined that her life will be based on essential priorities. Strict compliance will be required of any man desiring the pleasure of her company. Oh yes, it was she who said "I am first and foremost a business woman. If you meet my requirements I will fit you into my plan. And remember this, I require total loyalty from my man." So now I find myself thinking, My God have you forsaken me? What exactly do you require of me. How could she just turn and walk away from me? Still I know I must be willing to let her go. For only she controls her destiny. So, it must be me putting myself thru this misery. Sometimes I feel as if I'm in the ring with this ugly guy that keeps bashing my face. And I jab then I tuck. And I punch then I duck. No matter how much I bob and weave and roll it's still totally his show. No matter how valiant my fight he turns off my light. And no matter what I do he breaks me in two. Just once I'd like to know how it feels to win and see how much he appreciates having his face bashed in. Perhaps it's easy for her to say goodbye. "See you later Mr. Lee." But I miss her dearly. She was an angel to me. Afterall we did tango for awhile. We lived many a magic moment and we share at least a hundred smiles. She may or may not care for me. But the important part is we tried Jackie, didn't we? And make no mistakes my friend. Lessons have been learned and medals have already been earned. And I am the man still missing Jackie Chan. Jameslee@December22,2000 She'sJackieChan ImissyouJackie [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, you shared a hundred smiles and already earned the medals, you don't need me to tell you this is a good write, but it is. Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh*how very sad that it didn't work out better for you. This is a wonderful read from a sensitive and loving man. Your talent shines here, my friend. Much love and Christmas hugs from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A wonderful and creative write, Jimmy! Nathan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Funny and sad and cute and different!!! I enjoyed this one j--very original! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I appreciate your response Kethry, Startime, Nate and serenity...she is my friend and that is a blessing...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
She's still Jackie Chan...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm so glad that me and Jackie shared these times together...she really touched my heart...James |
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