»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #11
»
Bread And Butter
| Open Poetry #11 |
|
Bread And Butter |
|
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
|
A rewrite. Bread and butter Round goes the irascible churn And I am the butter within. Whipped to a palatable stern And used to the fullest chagrin. Knifed, spread with a delicate force A pinch of salt to add a savor To give the proper taste of course To a digestible flavor. In case the symbols are not clear. It's the married breakfast for two. With the usual note of snide cheer And routine turn of the screw The rue of the opposite sex The jousting of the practice field The mystery of their muse complex The strength of your parried yield. It's the base of wedded assign It is either that or resign. |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Knifed, spread with a delicate force A pinch of salt to add a savor To give the proper taste of course To a digestible flavor. In case the symbols are not clear. It's the married breakfast for two. With the usual note of snide cheer And routine turn of the screw ================= It's the base of wedded assign It is either that or resign =================  a little raspberry spread ... will liven up the resign of that bread  but personally ... I prefer me butter hot and melted ... drizzled ... *winkiewinkie* me |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You can butter me up ANYTIME ! I am resigned to loving the way you spread your words.  Love - hugs - and 'Please pass the jelly !' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
now this raises many thoughts...such as "you make me melt", and "butter wouldn't melt on his tongue" and "buttered up" and "butter on my popcorn, please, an extra helping..." such as I always have extra helpings of your poems...luckily for me, you are non-fattening...{~,^}... hugs to you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
seymour...I can only add that in my particular case? The buttered side always seems to fall, face-down! Sighs, smiles and hugs for you! |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Well you won't lose any weight with lots of drizzled butter. Winkiewinkie. Marge, well I might just do that. *L* Karilea, Well I guess I'm not fattening. *K* Serenity, Funny comment, thanks. *L* |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
