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From Deepest Depths (a repost)
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From Deepest Depths (a repost) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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From deepest depths of love's remorse From whence my heart strayed from it's course Within these walls I hang my head Stumbling through visions of dread I feel the heat upon my back I know you're peering through the cracks The cracks upon this broken heart This heart you left all torn apart The love once shared now broken and frayed All but ashes of rot and decay |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
From deepest depths of love's remorse From whence my heart strayed from it's course Within these walls I hang my head Stumbling through visions of dread I feel the heat upon my back I know you're peering through the cracks ============== my goodness Jeff... you do indeed bleed from deep places within.. this is such an emotive piece... you have expressed so much emotion in a few well chosen and poetically spoken words. Im glad you reposted it..cause I missed it before...now it goes in my file  take care Jeff-gator jm |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Pain........well expressed. "I know you're peering through the cracks" Excellent! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you JM-gator...this piece didn't get much attnention the first time around so I thought I'd give it another shot  Thank you as well Dream keeper  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good stuff Jeff.. From Deepest Depths I can see you "stumbling through visions of dread." Very souls searching piece....ethome... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Jeffrey, this is indeed a soul-searching piece. Good to see you! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Haunting piece my friend. I see you have been digging deep within. Well done. Jenn Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Hi Jeffrey, I love the simple power of this poem. And you were right to post it again... thanks. Linda Munday. And thanks for letting me know about your home page..its great |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A lot of pain in these words, Jeffrey. Corinne |
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