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Veiled In "Blue
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Veiled In "Blue |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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 Do you think of me often, as I think of you When the moon is full and the sky's dark blue? When the clouds bring a haze, over moonbeams glow, Do you think of me then, do you wish me to know? In the nighttime of last, as that moon, almost full Broke away from the haze, leaving me in it's pull, I kept following the trail, that my eyes viewed beside, Wanting feelings of knowing, to release them, their hide. When life hurts me most and you've always been there Do you notice the comfort in the words that we share? Do they reach deep within, do they tug at your strings When the slightest of touch, from mine, pleasure bring? All alone in the darkness, no stars seemed to be, Just the blueness surrounding, and cresting their sea. My mind, peaceful stating, intense upon you, When I raise up my eyes, into yours, veiled in blue. Do you know what your kisses, in silence create When you press them to mine, and my hunger, they sate? When the wholeness of you, fills the wholeness of me Do you linger in thoughts, as we subside quietly? The seas of the clouds, their tides taking hold. They swirled, as to choke all the glow of the gold. In passing the beams, appeared voids in this sea, Of the night time in calming, within darkness set free. When releasing my sighs, do you notice my lips Do you see know how I love, when you touch just the tips? Do you see my smile growing, eyes sweeping your face When the nearness of you, pulls me into embrace? Still rounding the bend, in homeward be bound, As the blue thoughts kept rising, as desires surround The moon of my being, missing slice, crescent thin, Tomorrow brings dawn, and will empty, full in. Do you know of my passion, as I watch shadowed eyes When I mirror desires and the moon behind cries? When it loses it's powers, when the light begins rise Do you think of me then, in the dawning of skies? When the tide of emotion has swept over me Will you be my "forever", will you float me your sea? When the calm of your dark, in the midnight of blue Reaches light, waking moments, will you think of me too? ~Wynter "Blues" *found this in my files dated during a trying time..haven't found it posted anywhere so I am posting now...  < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-20-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is quite beautiful, and I am glad you found it, and that I found it...thank you Wynter, for sharing... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
im glad you found it too..a beauty of a find ha.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
I am also glad you posted this Remarkable writing. wonderful flow and the words~~~Well them melt my heart. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
nakdthoughts-A wonderous peice. Beautifully written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sunshine and ~Victoria, I was searching for blue poems and ran across this..have you ever reread something you wrote and wondered who wrote it as if it couldn't be from inside you...this is one although, if my memory and date serves me correctly, which it rarely does, this was the day after my husband asked to be free of me....and the moon was full and hazy outside my car window on my drive home from a day away. thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
John R- I used the melted heart in my poem yesterday I don't know if you noticed it *s thanks ~Wynter Poeminister- hmmmmmmmm I love Poe and just took another look at your name I was thinking poem minister..but now I see...  thank you for reading me ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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