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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
Answer me, sweet rose, refresh me with your smile abandon your reality and be with me awhile Bring me in from waltzing rains give hope, encouragemt release me from these mortal chains be mine, for you are heaven sent [This message has been edited by Highlander (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh this likes me...immensely.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Love this one, so sweet  Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sweet words you say! I hope your angel hears you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
abandon your reality....... what a powerful line this is. Loved it. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
short, sweet and well written.... jwesley |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Such a sweet poem... =) -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Highlander, This is well done. Such talent. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is so beautiful...any Angel in her right mind would have to breathlessly answer Yes! Heart woven and love touched...excellent writing~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Highlander, wonderful piece. I especially love the feel of the 1st stanza!! Are you the Highlander that I ran into at Writer's Write? |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
a great big *sigh* this was so beautiful! Snow |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hate to echo but the first thought that went through my mind was that "this is sooooo sweet!" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful penned...I really enjoyed this excellent piece. Charisma |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
deeply touching and most irresistable plea... -Tier |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Highlander~ You made me swoon this morning......this is stunning... -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it's beautiful, but unfortunately, the answer is sometimes no! You are a very gifted poet.... "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
highlander- ahhh a romantic i see  excellent poem,this is! enjoyed the read very much. take care. ~amy~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Highlander, great writing here and thank you for an enjoyable read... coco |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
*dreamy sigh* such a way with words... "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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