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Kethry
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0 posted 2000-12-19 04:23 PM


Look Marsha I figured it out... I think  .


Dusk comes with soft tread
bringing thoughts of dread
Can dreams rise instead?

By stars candlelight
Awakening in fright
What closed in the night?

In the early morn
I'm awake forlorn
Who rides with the dawn?

and just for the practice one that doesn't rhyme


In the midst of night
feeling sorrow's lure
Who seeks tomorrow?




Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-12-19 04:34 PM


Kethry~   I think these are great!!   -SEA
peppermint35
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2 posted 2000-12-19 04:48 PM


So do I, good job

Pepper
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Percy Bysshe Shelley

Kethry
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3 posted 2000-12-19 04:52 PM


SEA and Pepper,
I'm not sure they are what what Whykus are supposed to be. I'm no good at following instructions.   Thanks for responding.
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


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Kethry~ sometimes rules don't matter!!   -SEA
Kethry
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5 posted 2000-12-20 08:31 AM


Thanks SEA,
Maybe I'll check with Nan though she knows about these things.
be well
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


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6 posted 2000-12-20 11:12 AM


i enjoyed reading them, especially the first one
Marsha
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7 posted 2000-12-20 01:26 PM


Kethry love, I knew you would, and yours are so much better than mine were. (I found them hard work dear heart and you know how much I detest anything that takes too much effort) You know exactly what I was going to say then, I can see you smiling from here.    
These are absolutely fabulous love they really are
Wondeful work  
Take care
                 Slushy Mushy
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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