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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Your Words I cannot read your words no longer, not again they make me feel unreal unexplained totally unheard chasms caused by cryptic lift what a gift, what a gift earthquaked rumbles go unfelt leaving one to simply melt in the fires of the street waiting for the water that make me cry then by and bye I fear my sighs will be heard then go unheard and right now I cannot be absurd I cannot read your words they make me feel touch my heart burrow in and set up keeping there within Nay I shall not read the missive and get the lift from your gifts of love and life and light through this dark and darker night and tremble in the wake No tomorrow is another day the sun shall shine I'll find my way to you in here and read you clear and loud and be proud of the way you shine, make you mine for yet another day, so then tomorrow I shall read your words Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, I can read your words ANYTIME...especially when they are written as eloquently as this... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, I think the next challenge shall be to find you another hobby!...LOL...thanks for taking the time to read... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~  I agree completly with Balladeer.......I love finding your poems in here!! -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh...writing my heart for me tonight...HUGS to you, with my understanding... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sauce for the goose - I find your words equally compelling~S~ |
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Ramses Junior Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 40Porsgrunn, Telemark, Norway |
Sunshine... As the others say, your words are really magic, hope to read more of them soon... -Ramses- |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is utterly utterly gorgeous. Talk about lifted on wings of fire love, this is an excellant, beautiful, spellbinding poem from you. Here I go waving my little flag, and shouting encore, encore! Truly wonderful love Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, I cannot read your words it causes tears to start in reading you,I'm reading me your words settle in my heart I cannot read your words without reading my pain I see a slender shadow that haunts me now and once again I cannot read your words lest my heart be tangled there and yet,and yet, read you I must to help me handle care for when I read your words I see the spring of hope I see your shining strength that enables me to cope. Write on, be strong Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
the sun shall shine I'll find my way to you in here and read you clear and loud and be proud of the way you shine ============================== Oh, that I could write words that would be as important as those. My how you DO shine! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...you musn't agree with 'Deer...not allowed...{~,^} Serenity...of course we know what's going on, don't we?... Mr. Yeats...thank you... Ramses...you can find me scattered hither and yon...thank you... Marsha, I shall encore soon...thank you... Kethry, this is truly from your heart, and should be, with a little editing, posted in its own right...well done, my friend... Interloper, all words are important, never doubt yours for a moment...never...and...thank you {~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I will always read your words. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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