Open Poetry #11 |
Each Time You |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Each Time You Each time you speak to me I hear a heavenly angel sing And each time you whisper my name I feel a bell ring If I lost you I would spend my days looking for my heart For if you left my world, my soul, my being would fall apart Dreams would mean nothing and my days would be as night If love were forsaken then I'd live forever without sunlight I'd stay in the dark hiding myself in the shadows of pain Never to smile, to laugh, to love, no never to do so again When you touch my soul I can feel myself about to soar And each time I breathe you I want just a little bit more If I lost my anchor I'd drift forever lost on heartaches sea For if I'm cast adrift I'd never know where or who is me The sunlight on life's waters would wink at me with glee But a heart that's broken doesn't want to stay, just to flee I'd keep the pieces numbered and maybe try to put it back More likely I'd forget for without a heart, it's pain I'd lack When you take me on wings of desire to touch the sun And each time I discover anew that you are the only one If I lost the ability to feel your touch where I need it to be I'd lose that part of my soul, that essence that is love to me If I lost love I'd be seeking the taste of your kisses flame And my heart, my whole being would never feel the same I'll try to keep this love burning with passions heated fire For with your love and touch we can further and higher Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-18-2000).] |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
Absolutely incredible! So much passion and love written here. You're an extremely talented person. I really enjoyed this. --Cassandra |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ this is just so beautiful.......I love the way this feels So devoted......so full of love -SEA |
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Ramses Junior Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 40Porsgrunn, Telemark, Norway |
Marsha Mmmmm this is so romantic and beautiful...Hope I have someone writing this way about me someday Ramses |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Cassandra, thank you most kindly, but you are far too kind, and I truly do thank you. (Now if you want talent, just read Circe, sorry I mean SEA, her nickname is Circe she has real talent honestly.) And I know you would greatly enjoy it too. Take care Marsha Circe, thank you muchly sweetie, I'm really pleased this one came out. It was one of those restless nights and well you know, if I couldn't drift off so I wrote instead. Well it was either that or start eating a wedge of cheese. Take care love Mushy Ramses, thank you, and I'm sure you will have someone who writes just for you. I do appreciate you stopping to read and taking the time to reply, so I'll say thank you again. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
Sweet Mushy Marsha with a sister who has my name! Sweet, sweet write and will have to come back to read it as time permits but wanted to remind you to pick up your equipment -- (pun) -- if you run into trouble locating a angel, these eyes may detect what human eyes cannot! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gee, nothing wrong with a wedge of cheese; but then you need a cracker, and a Jalpeno, something to wash the pain away, and then another, and another...ahhh, then sleep. Beautiful write my friend, enjoyed this read. jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kindasorta, and which one of the little 'witches' is it love. No I love them really, and if only I could find their really's I'd be fine. Thank you I do appreciate it, I truly do. Jimmy, you're right there is nothing wrong with a wedge of cheese, and then it's never just one cracker is it. Anyway to be honest if I'm going to start on the cheese, then it's some fruit cake with it. (I know it sounds discusting but they go excellantly together.) I'm glad you like it love. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Awww...Marsha...how very romantic and sweet this is...You have such a way of penning these love poems....This goes in with the rest of em'... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
AH er Ah Gee I better not ask. i love reading your work. i get carried away in the words you pen. Love and light, Richard |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha~ excellent!!! this was breathtakingly beautiful and full of such emotion and love! i can't give this high enough compliments, just know i greatly enjoyed reading it. as always your heart and love shine through in everything you write! take care ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
LL, thank you love, yet again I thank you. I'm pleased it came out so well. Much better for me than cheese, well at 2am it's probably not a good idea is it? Exactly Take care Mushy Marsha Richard, ask away love (I might not answer but you can ask. ) I'm glad these scribbles of mine seem to carry you. Mmmm I thank you for the compliment, I truly do. Take care Mushy Marsha Amy love, thank you very muchly, you know i enjoy seeing your name on my posts. I can never see too much of friends, take care of yourself love, and keep your chin up. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Gosh who is this man that has you so smitten? And where in this cold world did you find him?? So beautifully written, I hope he reads all of these works. I'm happy for you. You know all those things you said you would be without him, that's me Happy Christmas Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sandra love, he is out there, he's waiting to find you, I know he is. And you will turn a corner one day and wham it'll hit you. Until that day comes it's one step at a time. Thank you love, and look after yourself, because you deserve it, you truly do. take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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