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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Frigid zephyrs gust Greeting early traveler Wind chill, minus twelve! 12-18-2000 [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 12-18-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ This is very good. I don't like the COLD ... but your thoughts are indeed quite frigid. You do these so well. Happy Holidays. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Minus 12??? I have never been where it was that cold! eek! No thank you.......30 is ok.......snow is good, but wow.....that's too cold!  -SEA |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Burr..... THis one makes me happy I'm in Florida!! Nicely done. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
OOPs cold, cold. I know this kind of cold well and I hate it. *shivering* Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I know such coldness living in Saskatchewan. A Wonderful haiku. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dennis, do you really experience such cold weather? gosh, now i think i understand why you dislike winter so much... sometimes i am freezing in spore and the lowest temperature is like 24 degree celsius....! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is so real that I have goosebumps just reading it! Great writing as always, Bro. Love, Sis Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Dennis, Lovely haiku. Hey, that is Michigan weather! Have faith, in 10 minutes it will change. INclan |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Dennis~ Very creative look at Winter's chill. I can always depend on you for excellent senryus and haikus! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh den! you know you used my favorite word! zephyr......  heehee..jeez its getting wintery isnt it..! i cant get warm in this house and reading windy poetry isnt warming me up! lol great one as always hugs, g (fallen rain aka dgvarner...lol) "the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'" -unknown |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
BBBBRRRR a chilly poem for a chilly time of year, glad I am closed to a fire, enjoyed the read. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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