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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2000-12-18 08:22 AM


Frigid zephyrs gust

Greeting early traveler

Wind chill, minus twelve!


12-18-2000




[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 12-18-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-12-18 11:24 AM


Dennis~
This is very good.
I don't like the COLD ...
but your thoughts are indeed quite frigid.
You do these so well.
Happy Holidays.
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 2000-12-18 11:34 AM


Minus 12??? I have never been where it was that cold! eek! No thank you.......30 is ok.......snow is good, but wow.....that's too cold!   -SEA
dragonpoe
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Palm Bay, Florida
3 posted 2000-12-18 11:51 AM


Burr.....
THis one makes me happy I'm in Florida!!
Nicely done.

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dragonpoe

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4 posted 2000-12-18 11:53 AM


OOPs cold, cold. I know this kind of cold well and I hate it. *shivering* Much love to you from me.
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Poeminister
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5 posted 2000-12-18 12:02 PM


I know such coldness living in Saskatchewan.
A Wonderful haiku. Nicely done.

Poeminister    

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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6 posted 2000-12-18 12:22 PM


dennis, do you really experience such cold weather? gosh, now i think i understand why you dislike winter so much...

sometimes i am freezing in spore and the lowest temperature is like 24 degree celsius....!

ellie LeJeune
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7 posted 2000-12-18 09:22 PM


This is so real that I have goosebumps just reading it! Great writing as always, Bro. Love, Sis

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



INclan
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8 posted 2000-12-19 09:58 AM


Dennis,

Lovely haiku.  Hey, that is Michigan weather!  Have faith, in 10 minutes it will change.

INclan

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9 posted 2000-12-19 11:06 AM



Dennis~

Very creative look at Winter's chill.  I can always depend on you for excellent senryus and haikus!  

Take care,
Melissa


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dgvarner
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10 posted 2000-12-19 11:51 AM


oh den! you know you used my favorite word!  zephyr......    

heehee..jeez its getting wintery isnt it..!  i cant get warm in this house and reading windy poetry isnt warming me up!  lol

great one as always  
hugs, g
(fallen rain aka dgvarner...lol)

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-unknown

brian madden
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11 posted 2000-12-19 02:28 PM


BBBBRRRR

a chilly poem for a chilly time of year, glad I am closed to a fire, enjoyed the read.

"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

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