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The Mouse Before Christmas
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The Mouse Before Christmas |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Mouse Before Christmas It was the night before Christmas and all thru the house the only creature stirring was...a mouse. The gifts were all placed under the tree. I was sleeping real good til the mouse awakened me. I got out of bed quick as a wink. I turned on the light and the mouse stood up and blinked. He was caught in the act opening a gift. Somehow that mouse thought that gift was his. I proceeded to chase that mouse all around the house for a minute or two. Finally I caught him and stuck him in my shoe. He seemed quite tame as he peeked out every now and than wondering why I was ruining this Christmas night for him. It was than that I noticed the present he had nibbled upon was not one I placed under the tree. I picked it up and noticed it definately was not a gift meant for me. I read the tag and to my surprise it read To: Mouse from: Santa. I could barely believe my eyes. I opened it up and to this mouse's delight it was a large block of tender cheese perfectly sliced. So mouse got his cheese and we ate every bite. Merry Christmas to all and to all a good night. Jameslee@December17,2000 Hope one and all have a very Merry Christmas. [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 12-18-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~  This is adorable!!!  I hope you have a beautiful Christmas sweet friend -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great fantasy here James ...geez I hope your shoe doesn't smell like some I can think of. This was a lot of fun to read and the best of the holidays to you too my friend!! ethome |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 *lol*....enjoyed this funny poem....wonderful done my friend.....merry Christmas to you. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi James, Merry Christmas to you sweet thing, this was so cute, very much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
 MERRY CHRISTMAS JAMES.. HUGS ~Victoria~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Really, really cute. Happy Holidays ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
How precious! I'll have to read this to my two little neices Jessica and Hannah.. they will love it! Thank you for the holiday cheer! :P --Cassandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling with delight* oh yes, I so needed this delightful poem. Thank you so very much James. Hugs to you and much love from me to you. Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year, dear man. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
This was TOOOOO cute... What funny images I had in my head as I read this..Great work... ~LL~< !signature-->The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-18-2000).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very entertaining Christmas poem with lovely and hilarious imagery...you can't go wrong with that...anyways, Jimmy, Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones! Nathan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
JL, ya got me giggling on this one and as a matter of fact the lil one just loves stories about mice... So you know what that means my friend... I must-I must read to her this one.... Thank you for the read and a MERRY CHRISTMAS to you too coco |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I am so glad I could bring a little bit of Chrismas cheer to each one of you...Merry Christmas and merry kisses...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This mouse is sticking around for one more round..James |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, i will be glad to offer a little bump....fabulous mouse story  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 Merry Christmas James and all in poetry land |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
This was a very cute, heartfelt poem! Christmas spirit does come to everyone, all sizes. Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you, my friend! Sincerely, Noah Eaton |
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