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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-12-17 11:05 PM



        Solipsism , a theory that the self can  know nothing but its own madifications                                                                                                                                               Solipsism

I am really not a solipsist
On that I insist.
It stems of course from within but
Just under the skin.

I do have modifications
There my foundations
Self is a given existent
Although persistent.

For the ego, self or its id
Stems of common grid.
Gathered within a common pot
Of which there's allot.

So do not make like your the world
A cosmos unfurled.
We are in bloom just a flower
Only for an hour.

So stand your space on your ground and
Smile and look around.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-17 11:16 PM


My Ego took my Self and is smiling at my Id, and you...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




serenity blaze
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2 posted 2000-12-17 11:18 PM


*smiles*

Very good advice. (You are quite the philospher, seymour.)

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-12-17 11:26 PM


I am really not a solipsist
On that I insist.
It stems of course from within but
Just under the skin.
==============
UMMMM ... did anyone ever tell ya men who use big words and dictionarys are sexy
*winkiewinkie*
OH YEAH ... way cool poem Sy-guy...WAAAAY  
later stinky ID gator (cluck cluck) hehe
me

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Poeminister
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4 posted 2000-12-17 11:43 PM


"For the ego, self or its id
Stems of common grid."

Interesting philosophical peice.  Are we all just happenings of one mind? Not in my beliefs either.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister
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Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-12-18 11:29 AM


Karilea,
Thank you and *L*

Serenity,
Thank you sweet.

JM,
My self, my ego and my ID all thank you.
Winkiewinkie, Stinky

Poeminister,
Thank you for the nice comment.

Sven
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6 posted 2000-12-18 06:38 PM


my ego and I might just get rid
of that silly, silly id
for he's just a small one you see
who's getting in the way of me being me. . .

great one Sy. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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